The Future Of Mobius

The Future Of Mobius

Eggman has finally conquered Mobius! He has turned almost everyone into robots! Will some brave friends be able to stop him and return Mobius to its original state?

published on January 26, 2015not completed

A little royalty

Celina, Sky and Swift walked sneakily through the streets. The number of robot followers were increasing, due to all the Mobians getting caught. They had to be extra careful now.
"Um, Celina, just a question," Sky said quietly.
Celina turned and looked at her. "WhAt Is iT?"
"Um well I was thinking. What if like, one of us get hurt or something? Where will we hide? Are we like, going to hide in a house or something?"
Celina stared at her. "Um, WeLl ThaTs RheTorIcaL. Of CouRsE we WiLl."
Sky bit her lip. "Oh. Yeah. Sorry."
They kept walking.
"ShH, GiRls, ComE HeRe," Celina said quietly.
They all walked to Celina quietly.
"What is it?" Swift asked.
"LoOk ThErE," Celina said, pointing a finger at the roof of a tall building.
On top of the building was a hedgehog with the Dauntless sign on her shoulder. She was being cornered by two robots, and kept looking behind her.
Then she jumped.
Celina, Sky, and Swit gasped in unison.
"Why do she do that?!" Sky gasped.
"I dOnT KnoW," Celina said. "C'Mon LeTs FiNd OuT," an with that she ran off towards the side of the building where the girl fell.
Swift and Sky followed.
She they got there, Celina looked at the hedgehog girl. She was sitting up slowly and ribbon her head.
"WhY did YoU JumP?" Celina asked suddenly.
The girl yelped in surprise and looked at Celina
Robot! She thought. But then she saw Swift and Sky running after Celina and stopped when they reached her. Mobians? She thought.
"I jumped because I'd rather die jumping off a building then do at the hands of robots." She looked at Celina again. "Speaking of-"
Celina cut her off. "I'm A ReBeL. WhAts YoUr NaMe?"
"I'm Jackie. I'm the Dauntless Mobian queen." She said.
Sky gasped. "Dauntless queen? I'm a Dauntless Mobian!"
Nice!" Jackie said.
"Well any way," Swift spoke up, "Celina is forming an alliance. Wanna join?"
Celina shot Swift a look, but looked back at Jackie.
"An alliance? Uh... Well, I have an alliance of my own. I can't just leave my people." Jackie said.
"WeLl, Go to YouR PeOplE ThEn, I CaN GeT OthEr PeoPle," Celina said dissapointedly.
"Ok thank you! I'm sorry," Jackie said as she ran off.

~this is not the last we will see of Jackie! I promise!~
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Is this story dead? Also are spots still open
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on March 15, 2018
this is a relic from ancient times
might pick this up again one day
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NERD
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that's me!
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on July 31, 2017
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on July 31, 2017
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on July 31, 2017
I can't believe you haven't updated this in so long DX
I'll make you a deal.
I put a new chapter in Jackie's story of this, and you put a new chapter in this one.
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man i dont ever plan on updating this ever
i dont even like sonic anymore
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Aw man :( now wel'll never know who wins
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on May 20, 2016
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on May 20, 2016
OMFG I REMEMBER THIS
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this used to be the shit on qfeast
man i started some great stuff
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im stalking the page ok
i dont think u even asked to be in
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on January 27, 2016
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on January 27, 2016
YOU NEVER ADDED MY OCS INTO THE STORY
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on January 27, 2016
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on January 27, 2016
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on January 27, 2016
Sorry to rush, but when are you planning on releasing the next chapter?
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on March 11, 2015
This was damn awesome!!!
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Thanks :3
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on March 05, 2015
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on March 05, 2015
I read chapter 7 and at the end I was like; "Oh my god... My favorite chapter has been found... :,D
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on February 27, 2015
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on February 27, 2015
Everytime I read through chapter 4, I wish I could just reach through the screen and hug Sonic and tell him it's gonna be okay.
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on February 27, 2015
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on February 26, 2015
Can Lilanna be in it? (leat)
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Sure I'll try and squeeze her in somewhere
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
Whoa class!
I'm hoping you can include Jackie soon, just remember she's the leader of the Dauntless Mobians, as she founded the group.
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@JackieTheHedgehog she's in!
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:D glad you love it
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on February 22, 2015
LOVE IT!
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 13, 2015
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on February 13, 2015
Hey, Sky's not the only Dauntless Mobian.
Jackie is the LEADER of the Dauntless Mobians, you know!
Clearly says so on my form!
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Jeez calm down,its her story
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on February 13, 2015
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on February 08, 2015
Shara : I can be in?????
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on January 30, 2015
Oh! It's so good so far....thanks for putting me the story......that WAS me right, there are other crystals in here
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Ummmm if you don't mind me azking.....can I make a story about this....i-in my character POV i-I can put a couple of your characters in it
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Your very welcome!
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on January 28, 2015
K. Thanks x3
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on January 28, 2015
Alright....oh! And I'm sure I'll put your name in after all this WAS your idea
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on January 28, 2015
To get all that stuff, just go off my The Future of Mobius RP page. Just get a couple characters from the story off there. Like Sky, Sapphire, Celina, etc.
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on January 28, 2015
Yay! And thankz all I need iz a couple of your characterz ya know;perzonalitiez, drezzez lookz, ect ect
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on January 28, 2015
Sure!
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on January 28, 2015
If you don't mind
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on January 28, 2015
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on January 28, 2015
Oh...Thatz alright! ^_^
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on January 28, 2015
No. Its Matlen's OC Crystal. sowwy
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on January 30, 2015
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on January 28, 2015
Can Camille And Frost Be In It?
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Er, I would say no for now. I already have so many people to add right now. I'm sowwy :(
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You're Welcome.
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on January 27, 2015
Thank you for understanding ¥.¥
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on January 27, 2015
It's Fine, I Understand.
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on January 27, 2015
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on January 27, 2015
Awesome!!
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on January 26, 2015
Shara is not a robot she a rebel but can she be in the story???
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Sure! And people who are Rebels and not robots are just Mobians.
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Cool ^.^
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on January 27, 2015
Good oh Btw Shara and Silvers wedding won't be on irl V-Day it wil be in a few days ^.^' sorry for not saying sooner
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on January 27, 2015
I'm not xD
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on January 27, 2015
XD dont judge me
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on January 27, 2015
Yeah I didn't know how to spell that so.....yeah XD
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on January 26, 2015
I'm I going to be in it? :3
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Sure! ^.^
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NP :3
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on January 26, 2015
Thanks! :3
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on January 26, 2015
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on January 26, 2015
can i be in it?
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:T eh, sure
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on January 26, 2015
Thanks
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on January 26, 2015
i posted it
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on January 26, 2015
Could you post her stuff on my RP Page for this? Its where I get all my info
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on January 26, 2015
Can I be in? x3
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Sure! X3 have you posted stuff on my rp page? I get all my info off there
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Yes ^^
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on January 27, 2015
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on January 26, 2015
Can I be in this? :D
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Yeah! X3
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on January 26, 2015
Awesome *lays back and relaxes* lol
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on January 26, 2015
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on January 26, 2015
Yay! Thank you! Do I need to do anything?
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