I really love this story.... Very intimidating. You are very talented and have fantastic imagination. You should also put alot more of the characters thoughts of certain situations in it as well to give a better view of how they handle conflicts in the story. If done, we would understand the characters personality on a way better level
Continue with it! This is like the best story EVER! MORE! And yeah have them do it. bc tht would make it more interesting to see wat would happen next!
Ben- god is that you?
Me-yes.
Ben- I'll be good plz!
Jeff: hell na.
Ben-where the crack?
Me- up your ass!
Ben- get it out.
SLENDERMAN: GET F*CK OUT OF HERE GAY BOY!
Can u make 3 more long ones today!??!?!?!