I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

Jeff falls in love with a girl named crystal. Jeffxcrystal love story.

published on February 18, 2014completed

My Lover's Brother

Jeff's POV

I told Crystal that I was going to take nap. She came with me. I took of my shirt and hoodie. I gave my hoodie to Crystal she put it right on. I took of my jeans and slipped on shorts.  we fell asleep, she fell asleep on my chest. We fell asleep around 2:00 and woke up at 4:30 because Ben woke us up by jumping up on my bed, screaming:
"its 4:30! The part starts at 6:00!! Wake yo asses up!"
"Shut the F*ck up Ben we both yelled.  I picked her up and threw her on the couch downstairs.  She asked me if I could go for a walk.
"Ok, take this pocket knife," I handed her a pocket knife.
"Thanks Jeff." She gave me a kiss and ran into the woods.

Crystal's POV

I was walking down my street and I wanted to go to the store to get Jeff a new knife. I walked into the store called "the kitchen Shop" it was a weird name. I got a  $19.99 knife for jeff, and a $5.99 for a cutting board, if I got just a knife, I would look suspicious, so I just got a cutting board with that. I didn't want to be late to the party so I took a shortcut down a alley. A guy was standing at the end of the alley. I ran to him
"I'm Crystal," I said, he looked so much like Jeff, but with lighter hair, stitches on his face, and green eyes.
"I'm Lui.." He replied.
"Do you know anybody named um.…Jeff??" I asked hoping he did.
"Well um, yea, he's kinda...uhh..um...My b-brother." His voice trailed of he stared behind me.
"J-Jeff?" He said. I turned around and saw Jeff standing behind me, about 10 feet away from me and Lui.
"I see you met Lui, Crystal." Jeff said taking his knife out.
"Yes I did! He looks like you!" I giggled.
Jeff plunged at me with his knife I moved a little over, he stabbed my arm. I was losing blood fast.
"Bye, Lui!" I yelled.
Jeff was chasing me. I still had the knife and the cutting board in my bag. I ran into the woods and Jeff wasn't far behind me. I ran into the mansion and ran up the stairs, into Toby's room.
"What the fu-"
"Toby, I met Lui, and then Jeff stabbed my arm and he chased me." Toby stood me up grabbed one of his hoodie, and wrapped it around my arm. Jeff barged in. He held up his knife and Toby took out his hatchet. Last thing I saw before I passed out, was Toby and Jeff fighting.
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CONTINUE THIS DAMNED STORY I REFUSE TO BE LEFT WITH A F*CKING CLIFHANGGER!!!!!
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on October 30, 2020
I really like the way the character dialogue is. It's very fitting with the setting
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on August 29, 2016
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Ben- god is that you?
Me-yes.
Ben- I'll be good plz!
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Everyone but Jeff and crystal: are you having sex?
Jeff: hell na.
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on July 08, 2016
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Ben-where the crack?
Me- up your ass!
Ben- get it out.
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Ben: IM GAY AND I WANT TO HAVE LITTLE BENNY CHILDREN.
SLENDERMAN: GET F*CK OUT OF HERE GAY BOY!
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on July 08, 2016
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on July 08, 2016
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on February 11, 2016
I like Jeff's illusion form. Just his hair covering his eyes. XD
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on January 16, 2016
jeff so sensitive...i like it!B)
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on November 24, 2015
I really love this story.... Very intimidating. You are very talented and have fantastic imagination. You should also put alot more of the characters thoughts of certain situations in it as well to give a better view of how they handle conflicts in the story. If done, we would understand the characters personality on a way better level
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on December 23, 2014
Good story
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on December 22, 2014
AWESOME!!! EVEN MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 23, 2014
Make more chapters soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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on April 23, 2014
Thumbs up
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on April 15, 2014
You should mke this into a book and publish it, Its AWESOME! I would so read it again!
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on April 09, 2014
Yup it will never stop
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on March 29, 2014
Make more!!! Or is that the last one :(
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on March 29, 2014
When r u gonna make the nest one?
Can u make 3 more long ones today!??!?!?!
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on March 21, 2014
Thanks so much! And I will!
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on March 21, 2014
Continue with it! This is like the best story EVER! MORE! And yeah have them do it. bc tht would make it more interesting to see wat would happen next!
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on March 21, 2014
No, never!
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on March 02, 2014
MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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on March 01, 2014
He sliced*'there throats, at he same time
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on February 20, 2014
Never mind!!
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on February 20, 2014
Ok guys, I must've end end the story, because I can't add any more chapters so I'll make a new stour but it's gonna be continued
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on February 20, 2014
I put more!
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on February 19, 2014
There's more!! I won't stop!
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on February 18, 2014
I made it :-*
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on February 18, 2014
Last paragraph it said: Jeff...I love you, don't* let that one person ruin you." Forget the "I" in that sentence. Lol B)
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on February 18, 2014
I made it :D
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on February 18, 2014
Ok <3
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on February 18, 2014
Thanks guys!
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on February 18, 2014