Tales of The Unpredictable

Tales of The Unpredictable

Ever had an unexpected surprise? A shock that appeared when you least expected it? Well, you're not the only one it happened to...This is, the tales of the unpredictable. New tales will be made one at a time

published on January 07, 2013not completed

Train

Train
Eva was never so sure about trains, if she ever fell aslepp, she feared she would be abducted. But tonight she had no other option, it was 11pm and she had to get the train from London to Glasgow, there was no chance her dad would be picking her up.
She managed to find a seat which had another beside it. She felt like falling asleep and she couldn't help it.
"Excuse me miss, ticket please." the grumpy conducter said,"after this stop it's Glasgow." Eva started to rub her eyes, she decided that she would read that new shaun hutson book. As she started reading , the train stopped and people got on the bus.
"Oh, you're a Shaun Hutson girl, are you? I like him myself." Eva looked next to her and saw a handsome man with glasses who was about the same age as her. "Well, I'm really liking this book, it's called unmarked graves." the man gave her a smile, "I'm obsessed with horror books," he said, gazing at her, "I love the way that there's never a happy ending-" "This stop is at Glasgow Central." phew! Eva was getting scared of this man, lucky the conductor called-but wait, the man followed her. "Is this your stop?" she asked, trying not to look at him, "Yes. Where do you live?" he asked, "I live in an apartment on Argyle street, you?" "What a coincidence! I live there as well!" "Yay," Eva sighed, shivering.
They were now in the building, "So eh, nice meeting you, good night." said Eva, now taking a sigh of relief, "What number are you?" he asked Eva, "Erm, 65." she felt that she shouldn't have told him that, "Oh," replied the man, paying the receptionist, "I'm 66!"
"But I've never seen you here before!" he gave her an obvious look, she now saw evil eyes behind those glasses of his, "I just moved in. Lift?" he asked her, "ladies first." she felt scared now, "Eh, no! I don't really trust lifts, I always take the stairs." she knew that he knew her fear, "well, good night sir, nice meeting you." he smiled at her as the lift closed, "Oh please Eva, call me Will, Will Andrews." she nearly wet herself, how did he know her name? But on the other hand, if something happened, he gave her his name, she could phone the police!
She ran upstairs as fast as she could, and didn't see the strange man. He couldn't get her now! She'd lock her door! She heard the lift squeak and open, the footsteps walked right next door, she was safe! Or so she thought... She wasn't just hearing things when she heard the sound of a drill as she slept.
The next morning, Eva was horrified to find a hole in her wall! She called the police immediately! She told them about Will Andrews and how she felt he was stalking her. They advised her to go somewhere else but Glasgow while they tried finding him.
And so she did, she packed her bags and got the earliest train to Aberdeen. She couldn't tell her parents, they would dote her like she was 5! She needed to be positive and try not to worry. Eva barely made the train, "City Rails stops at Argyle Street, London, Aberdeen and Edinburgh." the blurring voice surrounded the whole train station. She got on the train and was the first to sit down, more people came in and sat beside people. It was only on the 2nd last stop that gave Eva the chills because she was the only one on the train!
But thankfully, 1 person got on and out of all the seats decided to sit beside her. He had a hoodie on with the hood pulled up which frightened Eva a little, so she decided to pass the time with a conversation, "Oh great! I hated sitting by myself! It's really scary!" then she felt comforted when the man pulled down his hood, but the comfort turned into terror when she saw his face, "Hello Eva.."
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Photos story true??? It's kinda freaky...
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on October 13, 2013
Is the greyhound story true too??? If it is, then the man who made the Cane-Di-Carne is a very sick b!stard.
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on October 13, 2013
Is this a real story?? If it is then no offence but you can't kill a dog just because he's obedient and friendly. Honestly. What does he want, a pit-bull to gnaw his face off?
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on October 13, 2013
it has to be scary!
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on January 31, 2013
what do you mean
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on January 29, 2013
it's a scary story, are they going to be eating chicken?
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on January 17, 2013
well seriously dog meat

not my cup of coffee
or is that tea
i dont like either
gimme hot chocolate anyday
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on January 15, 2013
Eh, thanks. I'll take that as a compliment?
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on January 13, 2013
you should put it on and the greyhound story is horendous
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on January 12, 2013
Yeah, you were there, I was also gonna put the one about the waltzer that you made too and say it was by you
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on January 10, 2013
and train is good to
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on January 10, 2013
reincarnated
i was there when you made it remember
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on January 10, 2013
Made up, don't worry
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on January 08, 2013
Are these stories true or made up? If they're true, it's very sad:(
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on January 08, 2013