Where the Rainbow Begins

Where the Rainbow Begins

This is my version of the prequel of the Rainbow factory, I do not own it, AuroraDawn did, now, on to the summary The Rainbow factory had a long past, a thousand years had it stood, but what was at the beginning of the rainbow? who made the first rainbow? i'll tell you what, this is the story of a Pegasus and her machine. Dear Celestia, when will the war end.

published on February 05, 2014not completed

Damages on Pony's

Damages on Pony's Trinity’s POV

    i work so hard everyday, working along side me was my co-workers who consisted of DawnGuard the Unicorn who had bright green and yellow mane with a pale yellow for her coat and matching green eyes as Plain Swifter the Earth Pony was blue and a yellow mane with steel grey eyes, I went by the name of Rainbow, just Rainbow. i received that name at birth because of the color of my mane, rainbow stripes that complimented my blueish grey coat. Each day i work harder and harder, trying to get the physics right and bending metal to create my ideal machinery. My idea was making a machine that would extract vital colors from a certain object so that we could create the perfect rainbow, as others would just mainly work with pure magic, i looked at the scientific side of things.

    i piece of shrapnel came loose and came clattering down, i beat my wings furiously to get out of the way as it clashed to the ground. as it clanged down i had to stand back up. i look at my wings with a sad look, i was a really weak flyer, it was so weak that i could hardly hover. i shook my head and began glaring at Plain Swifter

“what the hell! that thing nearly killed me! your job was to make sure this thing doesn’t fall apart, what good is an earth pony without any strength!” i exclaimed

She glared at me “Yeah, well what good is a Pegasi who couldn't fly to get away huh?”

A pain struck my heart as i turned away, my tail curling up at the side making a hypnotic rainbow swirl. slouching, i just couldn’t bare it, me, a proud family of pegasi, couldn’t fly. Plain Swifter saw what she did and she sighed as she nudges her side

“look, sorry Trinity, it was my fault, i was wrong, i mean, i did forget to bolt that piece in, just stop being sad please?” he states, taking a step towards me

i shook my head “no you’re right, i’m pathetic” i then opened my wings, inspecting them and looking at the color of how my greyish blue coat gave off slight rainbow shimmers in the light “what good is having beautiful wings if you can’t use them right”

Dawn Guard went up to my side, sitting down and placing a hoof on my shoulder

“come on then, it ain’t all that bad, i mean i can’t use my horn properly, all i could do is levitate and power stuff up, you have brains Rainbow, something other pony’s don’t get”

“You’re quick on you feet and always there to help us” Plain states smiling at me

i couldn't help but smile myself, “you’re right!” i then got up “thanks guys, i just, lost it there for a moment”

    “hey no prob for a friend ey?” Plain states
    it wasn't the first time that i felt down because of my flightless abilities, it was more worse when i was with other pegasi, especially my family, they kept on asking why, why were they stuck with me when my younger sister had so much more potential. i shook my head and continued on, no need to dwell on the past i suppose, though it still bothers me like hell.

AN:// if you want to know what they look like here are there codes for Mlp pony creator at Dolldivine.com
Rainbow
3L4C000060B8E5FEFFC49D00001AE15C1UK1B3900B000000O1783FCCFF7FFF0M107F3FCC004CB2
Dawn Guard
3H3H000100FDFEBFFFC49D0010100FE66UL1B38000000000L108E800C3FE000K107F3FCC004CB2
Plain Swifter
3C480L0000455BFEFFC49D000014A6EFERN1837003000000J0F3FE70FF7FFF0I107F3FCC004CB2

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on September 30, 2014