When a planet from many galaxies away comes out of orbit and hits the blue moon, life starts and the Lunarians start discovering new parts of the moon. When all parts of the moon are discovered the Lunarian race thinks that life will be normal. Instead, when half of the moon disappears, they try to find out what caused it, and they might find more than they expected...
Whew. We survived! But we still were forced to run away to the desert. I gotta help the hurt ones. "Emily... help" croaks Cooper who has a big cut on the knee. I help him. "Thanks Em" he says. I help some others before Aqua tells me that he saw that the Moonstone gave him a prophecy that the desert is where the other is. That is pretty cool.
But maybe with longer chapters...
And I liked how u introduced the characters at the beginning
I love your characters!