When a planet from many galaxies away comes out of orbit and hits the blue moon, life starts and the Lunarians start discovering new parts of the moon. When all parts of the moon are discovered the Lunarian race thinks that life will be normal. Instead, when half of the moon disappears, they try to find out what caused it, and they might find more than they expected...
I am lost. Nobody else is here on the lost side. If there was somebody like Finn that could help me find my way back to Devin I could be back with my friends. Life here is hard. Luckily I can't die being a vampire. I feed on darkness and feelings. I am still hungry. If only I had Devin and his blazing steed army come here and get me out. Or if those nasty Royals show themselves. I thought I saw someone once. I wonder if he or she is still here. "Anybody here?" No answer.
But maybe with longer chapters...
And I liked how u introduced the characters at the beginning
I love your characters!