Rose's Early Years A Hogwarts

Rose's Early Years A Hogwarts

What happened after Rose arrived at Hogwarts? Read to find out about Rose Weasley's adventures!

published on January 04, 2014completed

The Plan

The Plan
"Got that? Good!" Rose recited  the procedure to her ingenious idea.
"I really don't think it's worth it, Rose, but if you say so..." Beth sighed. A friend was a friend.
     As they packed up, Rose did a time check charm, like the one Tessa had used. Rose's eyes widened. "No, no, no! We are late Beth! Its 10:20, and Astronomy starts at 12:00! Hurry!" she whispered. They slid down they stairs, bumped into walls, and scurried to the Slytherin dungeon. Beth shuddered. "Rose, it smells like rat poop here!"
Rose answered in a voice barely above a whisper. "No Beth, that's the smell of Fynn." Beth gurgled a laugh.
Whipping out her wand, Rose chanted "Alohamora!" The iron door swung open with  a load creak.
"Hello?" A sleepy voice sounded from inside. Beth grabbed Rose by the sleeve and pushed her into a dark alcove, then crawled in herself.  It was damp and moldy, with mildew climbing the dank walls. It was a disgust to the nostrils. And, adding to that, the hiding area has low and small, giving the girls a claustrophobic effect.
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Too short... :(
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Sry. I had other ideas, and I didn't really want to have more than 1 in progress at a time, so I put an end to it!
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 17, 2014
I'm sorry, but it was a bit too dramatic and pitiful. Also, misspelled.
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Don't say sorry! As long as your not being mean, negative reviews are fine with me. ;) Also, please tell me what misspelled, if there's too much for you to name, you don't have too! Also, where was it too dramatic?
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Besides, when I wrote that comment, it was only for the first chapter. I hadn't read the rest at the time.
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on July 17, 2014
Four stars-- my score for this.
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on July 17, 2014
It was a bit much when Rose started crying, because she was OLD enough to go to Hogwarts, and I thought maybe that part was a bit dramatic. Otherwise, it was pretty nice. The details were good.
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on July 16, 2014
Awesome! PART TWO!!!!
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on May 01, 2014
More! Please don't let the suspense kill me!!!!
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on April 23, 2014
Thanks guys! Finally some reads!
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on April 21, 2014
LOL I like the Perlin thing
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on March 24, 2014
Sry...The chapters are getting shorter!
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on January 27, 2014
Thanks Nyda!
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on January 06, 2014
AWESOME! Aurel you're really great at writing!
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on January 06, 2014
BTW, Rose is Hermione and Ron's daughter!
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on January 05, 2014