Cinderella

Cinderella

In my story, Cinderella doesn't cry when she's bullied or abused, she doesn't wait for the fairy to help her to the ball, she doesn't easily fall in love with the prince!!! My story is about a Cinderella who fights for her life!! This story is filled with my emotions, optimism and fighting spirit.. it's different and i hope you like it!!!!

published on January 08, 2014not completed

Distracted

Distracted It was decided! I was Cinderella, Prince Kyle's personal maid.. knock knock.. "I'm coming in your highness!" I pushed the door and entered. He was still sleeping, the retarded rich brat doesn't even guess i'm here to stab him.. Just look at his innocent childlike sleeping face! No one would guess he's a rich brat!! The son of the bloody King!! This idiot has a cute sleeping face that would make anyone want to get at his service! But i'm not gonna be fooled by his sweet idiotic smile!! :p

"Your highness.. um.. wake up!" ....... -__- .. That pig can't hear a thing! Don't tell me he's the type to sleep like a pig!! Oh well.. "WAKE UP PRINCE KYYYLE!!" He let out a little sigh but didn't open his eyes at all. "Prince Kyle.. you need to attend the crowning ceremony today.. What a pig!!" I bent on his bed, near his pillow and was about to shout in his ears but his hand suddenly flew out of nowhere and pulled me on the bed! I landed on him, my head pressed to his chest; "Prin-ce.. Pri---nce.. um.. you.." .. but his snore cut off my voice.. So he's still asleep then.. I tried to get off of him but his hands held me like they were made of Iron!! I didn't realise how strong he was but last time he got me by surprise and nearly strangled me to death! I tried getting off again but he just turned to his side and turned me with him! I was now under him! For a slender and innocent-like young man he weighs a ton!! His breath was on my cheeks and surprisingly it smelled like mint instead of bad breath from sleep!! His lips were almost on mine and i had a hard time breathing with his weight and my heart beating like it never did before! He moved a bit and the next time he moved his lips would be on mine!! "PRINCE KYLE"!! i exclaimed so loud that the whole castle might have heard me! He woke up with a sudden jolt and blinked! We stared at each other for 2 seconds and he quickly got up! I was sweating and panting from this load off of my body and when i looked at him, i nearly had a heart attack! Why was his face so flushed and blushed!???!!
I got off the bed and stood facing the door so that he couldn't see my face.. "Your breakfast and clothes are ready.. Please get down for the crowning ceremony!" I quickly got out of this suffocating room, and my heart was so loud i thought he heard!!
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on May 17, 2015
thanks @CrystalDiamond2323 !! am glad u read it :D really very happy :D thankssss
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on July 17, 2014
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on July 17, 2014
Write.more!!!!
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on July 14, 2014
:"> i forgot about his dream.... :"> heheheheheheeeeeeee it's not something to tell here :D
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on April 08, 2014
Yay you punky promised :) LOVE the new chapter ooooohh what was the prince dreaming of???
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on April 08, 2014
:"> thank u Celesty :">
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on March 12, 2014
Love the new chapter Kanny!!
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on March 11, 2014
:"> thanks!!! i'm looking at my notifications and as soon as i finish i'm heading to your stories ;)
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on February 14, 2014
Another Amazing story Kanny!
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on February 13, 2014
:D okkkkkk :"> thanks!! :D <3
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on February 02, 2014
pls pls inform me too;)
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on February 02, 2014
aww so nice!!! thanks coolsweeterthanother and blackcat123 ;) i pinky promise i'll complete it soon and i'll message you when i add new chapters :) thanks for your support!!!!!
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on January 30, 2014
Whoa amazing idea wish it was finished so I could read ita llll
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on January 29, 2014
Wow:-O I'm a fan of u.u r awesome :)
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on January 29, 2014
yes!!! i thought of you while writing about Kyle so i thought i should put up Kirito here :D it's a nice pic right???!!!! :D
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on January 23, 2014
it that picture supposed to be Kirito!!?!?!?!?
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on January 22, 2014
aww dont worry!!! a few more people to be killed, kill and die and then there's the happily ever after :D lol the sentence sounds like i'm killing everyone :">
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on January 09, 2014
I. WANT. TO. CRY!!!!!!!!!!! :(( :(( :((
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on January 09, 2014
:-O:D thanks!! the best part is yet to come!!
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on January 09, 2014
WOW
Better than the fairy tale
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on January 09, 2014