The Ultimate Fan Character Story!

The Ultimate Fan Character Story!

I have many fan characters and each of them will be included. Even the ones that haven't yet been fully updated!

published on November 23, 2013not completed

Amertarasu Hitomi

Amertarasu Hitomi
I was returning from my usual exorcist duties, when I noticed Okumura looking upset about something, I walked past him pretending not to notice although something told me that I should of done something to cheer him up.

"Amertarasu!" An eary voice sounded in my head, I turned around to spot Kuro (blackie) running after me.

"Kuro? What's the matter?" I responded

He sat down and wrapped his tail around his paws and turned his head back to look at Rin.

"It's Rin, he's upset about what you've become." he meowed with his ears pricking at my slightest movements.

I looked down at the slightest cracks in the ground, I didn't think that Rin would ever feel sorry for me after all that i've yelled in his face. Suddenly flash back's of Mephisto sticking the needle full of demons blood into my arm. It was one of the thoughts i didn't want to relay in my mind, it was one of the things that ruined my life forever.
A few tears fell from my eye's, I turned around and started running away from Kuro, even looking at Okumura's summoning just reminded me of him.

Suddenly the cracks in the ground became larger and the pathway was splitting in two and I fell into a deep dark hole almost like an abyss, I didn't scream I was awaiting my death anyway after whaty I'd become. The light from the top of the abyss disserpeared and I was left to face the darkness alone, suddenly my fall began to feel like it was slowing down and my feet hit the blackness at the bottom.
'How did I survive such a fall?' I contenplated I looked around seeing nothing but what seemed to be an endless tunnel of darkness. What would I do now there was nothing left?
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signaled not singled
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on November 25, 2013
because*

couldn't see what i was typing because you kept sending me messages
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on November 25, 2013
1. I changed it before you posted the comment

2. It's supposed to be Sever?

3. and you've only spotted 1 becaus even i'll admit to that one.
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on November 25, 2013