The Ultimate Fan Character Story!

The Ultimate Fan Character Story!

I have many fan characters and each of them will be included. Even the ones that haven't yet been fully updated!

published on November 23, 2013not completed

ShadowFlames

ShadowFlames I had just returned off the last patrol of the day and it was quite dark, i was hungry so i decided to grab something off the fresh-kill pile. As i was about to sit down to tuck into my meal, I heard cats from all over the forest screaming in pain! I turned around to find all ThunderClan cat's frozen with fear and their bodies stuck in shape from head to tail.
My mouth opened with shock and i ran to Firestar's den hoping he was alright, but i spoke too soon he was already frozen!

"It's gonna be all right!" I hoped as i un-sheathed my claws and lit them with a black flame trying to unfreeze the leader and return him back to normal.
Nothing was happening he was still rock solid I had to think fast and i ran to the WindClan border hoping they weren't frozen too! As i got to the WindClan entrance there was shattering noises and before i could step a paw into the WindClan camp a shard of ice touched my paw. "Is everyone gone?" I thought.

I was a coward! I ran away hoping i could find the answer, but i was wrong!
Suddenly everywhere went dark no tree's or snow under my paws just a pitch black floor smooth like rock.
I squinted my eye's and saw the starry outline of my lover DoveFeather.

"DoveFeather!? Thank StarClan you came, is this a prophecy?" I pleaded

Suddenly DoveFeathers fur bristled and her green eye's became red she ran towards me and kept swiping at my face simultaneously, yet each time i dodged them i couldn't attack back after all she was my lover!

"Your a coward! You destroyed everything and everyone! Fight back coward!" she spat

"I can't fight back!" I cried "I have nothing to fight for anymore!"

Tears fell from my face and everything returned to darkness i thought it was over until i passed out.
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signaled not singled
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on November 25, 2013
because*

couldn't see what i was typing because you kept sending me messages
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on November 25, 2013
1. I changed it before you posted the comment

2. It's supposed to be Sever?

3. and you've only spotted 1 becaus even i'll admit to that one.
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on November 25, 2013