Rise of the Paragon Parabolic

Rise of the Paragon Parabolic

My SAO fan fiction! This will be about my interactions throughout Sword Art Online (this will somewhat go with the story line of the show) this will be more like a journal

published on November 14, 2013not completed

Into Deep, Dark Shadows

It took me almost two weeks, but I have found where the laughing coffin guild hall is hidden, of all the places it is not where you would expect, it was on the 18th floor on a small door in a huge main building, talk about hiding in plain sight. "Well it's time to go and kill some killers and show them I don't mess around with this kind of thing." I said to myself.  I walked in through the door, and they had no guards, I thought this was unexpected, but then it occurred to me that not many people that weren't in the guild would be here since it's fairly well hidden and unsuspected.  I was surprised when I walked in the guild leaders room, it was one of the last people I would have expected to be there, out of the 9,999 people who could have been running it, it was none other than Asuka, the same person who had been second command in my guild, I had unknowingly passed all of my remaining guild to the coffins.  I fell to my knees, "Of all the people to be the leader of this guild it had to be you?  I trusted you, I helped you, I even gave the guild to you, and then I find this."  she replied with a laugh, and said "Oh yea, about the guild, they are all dead, I got every single one just moments ago, and your the only one left for a guaranteed disbanding of the guild!"  I smiled and said "well there is an up side to this, not only will I deal a big blow to your guild, but you won't be around to see how things turn out, because I'm killing you right here, right now, I already know all of your fighting styles."  her eyes widened, "Well you may know my fighting style, but do you know theirs?" as she finished four people seemed to appear from each corner of the room and charge toward me, me being one of the higher level characters, and much better equipped, was able to kill them easily. "Your turn now you backstabbing rat." I said with a evil grin on my face, and I charged toward her before she could even react. I slammed her against the wall with my shield and proceeded to attack her with my sword, I had dazed her when she hit the wall, it was over, she was easy kill, or so I thought, just as her health was about at zero, more people started pouring in from the door to the outside world, there were at least ten of them, after that I don't remember what happened, I just remember waking up outside the building face down with players all around me, my health was low but no one was left in the guild hall when people started looking around, all they found was a sword called 'Dragon's Fang' it was the sword Asuka always had equipped, the very first thing I did was go see it to the nearest merchant I didn't want it, I would rather forget the whole ordeal had ever happened, but I knew I would have nightmares of it for the rest of my life, no matter how long it may be...


Next Chapter: <No Name as of yet> (this could be the real title, or I just haven't decided yet, I'll have to think up the next chapter to be for sure)
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on May 28, 2016
Great Job so far please continue this to the end
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Sorry dude maybe I'll continue to when I get my laptop but until then it will have to wait ha-ha, its been far to long since I've updated the stories
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Well here you can't update on mobile so I'm kinda stuck until I get my laptop that should be sometime in February
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on November 26, 2015
It won't bother me at all but I do have a laptop with me right now
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on November 26, 2015
Imagine if you had been one of the ones waiting since last year xD
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on November 26, 2015
Lol X3
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on November 26, 2015
Lol its been over a year since my last update xD
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on November 26, 2015
It's ok I just want to see what happens next thats all
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on November 26, 2015
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on November 26, 2015
When did you last update this...and WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE AGAIN?!
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I updated this before I went to the beach, (on June 2nd) and I will update when I get to it!
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well, with scool starting on Friday, my updates will become even less often just so you know, and Qfeast's rules don't help much!
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on August 04, 2014
You need to update moree!!
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on August 04, 2014
and?
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on August 04, 2014
That was two months ago dude -_-
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on June 02, 2014
to anyone who I didn't send it to, I updated
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on June 02, 2014
I could not overlook 'Kaiaba'...
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on May 31, 2014
Awesome story! I <3 that anime, and the laughing coffin guild has always scared me...
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if I were really there, they would scare me too!
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on June 13, 2014
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on May 23, 2014
well, it's a guild called the laughing coffins, they are a PK guild so they find various ways to kill them, from just battle to some very nasty conniving ways...
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on April 17, 2014
How do the coffins kill people? Cool story :)
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on April 17, 2014
I can't read the words probably.
Please add paragraphs :D
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on March 12, 2014
pt?
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on January 07, 2014
:D i cant pt to words...
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on January 07, 2014
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on January 02, 2014
I like it, it seems like a cool story line
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on December 13, 2013
so what do you think?
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on November 15, 2013