Rise of the Paragon Parabolic

Rise of the Paragon Parabolic

My SAO fan fiction! This will be about my interactions throughout Sword Art Online (this will somewhat go with the story line of the show) this will be more like a journal

published on November 14, 2013not completed

Keep Your Friends Close and Your Guild Closer

I am now successfully running a guild.  "The Gilded Lotus" is the name, I always love the look of a lotus flowers.  This is a small guild of about 10 people, then a message been sent saying our allied raiding guild had been eliminated, "The Moonlit Black Cats" they were on a looting run and had found a secret door trap, (there weren't any of those in the beta test that I knew of).  I realized that all 7 of the members must have died, that's when their GM (Guild Master) came in, he was in tears I then told him" I know everything, i had just heard about it myself and, I am sorry.  If there were anything i could have done I would have done it.  It must have been a one in a million chance of finding the trap." He screamed "I don't want or need your sympathy all of my friends are dead!  It's all that 'beater's' fault too."  "Beater?" I asked "there are only two Beaters I am aware of, Kirito and me".  "It was Kirito, I bet he killed them!  How else could they have found the door!" he sobbed.  I reassured him, "It's Okay, I don't think he killed them, or at least meant to."  He stormed out " I don't care what you think, I'm going to join my friends!" I was stunned as he ran out the door and used a teleport crystal, I had no idea where he went. About an hour later, I was told someone saw him jump off of floor one just outside the town of beginnings. I started crying, because I had not only lost an allied guild, but friends too. I couldn't believe that he would go and jump off the world like that.


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on May 28, 2016
Great Job so far please continue this to the end
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Sorry dude maybe I'll continue to when I get my laptop but until then it will have to wait ha-ha, its been far to long since I've updated the stories
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Well here you can't update on mobile so I'm kinda stuck until I get my laptop that should be sometime in February
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on November 26, 2015
It won't bother me at all but I do have a laptop with me right now
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on November 26, 2015
Imagine if you had been one of the ones waiting since last year xD
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on November 26, 2015
Lol X3
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on November 26, 2015
Lol its been over a year since my last update xD
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on November 26, 2015
It's ok I just want to see what happens next thats all
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on November 26, 2015
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on November 26, 2015
When did you last update this...and WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE AGAIN?!
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I updated this before I went to the beach, (on June 2nd) and I will update when I get to it!
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well, with scool starting on Friday, my updates will become even less often just so you know, and Qfeast's rules don't help much!
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on August 04, 2014
You need to update moree!!
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on August 04, 2014
and?
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on August 04, 2014
That was two months ago dude -_-
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on June 02, 2014
to anyone who I didn't send it to, I updated
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on June 02, 2014
I could not overlook 'Kaiaba'...
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on May 31, 2014
Awesome story! I <3 that anime, and the laughing coffin guild has always scared me...
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if I were really there, they would scare me too!
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on June 13, 2014
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on May 23, 2014
well, it's a guild called the laughing coffins, they are a PK guild so they find various ways to kill them, from just battle to some very nasty conniving ways...
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on April 17, 2014
How do the coffins kill people? Cool story :)
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on April 17, 2014
I can't read the words probably.
Please add paragraphs :D
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on March 12, 2014
pt?
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on January 07, 2014
:D i cant pt to words...
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on January 07, 2014
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on January 02, 2014
I like it, it seems like a cool story line
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on December 13, 2013
so what do you think?
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on November 15, 2013