Did You Do It?

Did You Do It?

This is a mystery story. It takes place at school and the main character is Beatrice. She tries to figure out who did the crime at school but meets some important people while do it...

published on July 27, 2015not completed

Heroism

        I was trapped in the bathroom with a hopeless way out. And of course do make matters worst, I was late to my favorite class. I guess these people didn't care if they were late or not.
        I hurt banging on each stall trying to find where I was.
        I was standing on the top of the toilet crouching down, hoping they can't find me from looking up the stall. Then I heard a familiar voice.
        "Hey, why are you guys in here? Don't you think you should go to class?" he said.
        He definitely wasn't a teacher, but he sounded really serious.
        Suddenly, I heard footsteps leading out into the hallway. That person just saved me!
        I unlocked the stall I was in and saw who lead those guys out. It was Bryan.
        I wasn't even thinking when I did this but I just hugged him and cried into his shoulder. He didn't really acted shocked, all he did was just hug we back and rub my back a little. It feel good and warm.
        When I finally decided to get off of him, my eyes were all red and I was smiling up at him. I somehow managed to mutter two words, "Thank you."
        He didn't need to say any words to know he showed gratitude.
        "We should really get to class. I'll take you there." Bryan said.
        He held my hand that felt like it meant to be a friendly gesture but I think he meant it for more. He held my hand the whole way to our seats!
        When we went in the classroom and we were still holding hands, I blushed really hard and looked at the floor.
        When we finally got to our seats, it seemed like we've been walking forever. He finally let go of my hand but it felt like the whole class was still staring at us. At least Mr. Fink was still teaching.
        He chuckled a bit and I was kinda confused why so I asked him.
        "I'm laughing because you're so nervous and shocked that I held your hand." he said, "I thought you knew I liked you."
        That's the moment where I had a huge grin on my face. I was so happy.
        "No, I didn't know that." I whispered. "I kinda like you, too.
        Something really unexpected happened.
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Write more of it!! Like, now. NOW NOW NOW!!!
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on July 30, 2015
>:3
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on July 27, 2015
Cool story
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Thanks.
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