I'm Not Good Enough For You (A Liam Payne FanFic)

I'm Not Good Enough For You (A Liam Payne FanFic)

Antonia is the new girl. She just moved to London. Liam is the freak, the bad boy who nobody likes. When they first meet, they hate each other but that soon changes when they find out more about each other's past. If they ever do grow feelings for one another, will they end up together or will somebody or their past come in between them? "Don't judge me by my past. I don't live there anymore." - Unknown.

published on November 01, 2013not completed

A Shopping Day With the Girls Gone A Little Wrong

A Shopping Day With the Girls Gone A Little Wrong Antonia P.O.V

I woke up and the sun blinded me. I looked at the time. Eight o'clock. Way too early for a Saturday.

My phone vibrated and I checked it out. A message from Megan.

From Meggie
Hey Tonster, what's up? ;) Wanna hang out? Xxx
Hmm.. Doesn't sound like a bad idea and I have nothing to do. Why not?

To Meggie
Sounds fun. :) Where should we meet? Xxx

Soon after, I got another message.

From Meggie
Meet at your house. Be ready at 9:30. The gurls are coming too if you don't mind.

To Meggie
Not at all. Here's my address: 14 Blackaby Street. See ya <33

From Meggie
What??? :o

To Meggie
What is it?

From Meggie
I'll tell you later. See ya ;) Xx <333

I charged my phone seeing as I forgot to last night. I stood up and rubbed my eyes. I ran downstairs and smelled something delicious.

"Good morning darling." He had a huge smile plastered on his face and I wondered why.

"Why so happy gramps?" "It's nothing. Just happy to see my granddaughter. Pancakes?" My mouth watered and I nodded. "Chocolate please." "Okey!" He flipped one and it landed perfectly on the pan. He then put it slowly on a plate and spread chocolate with a knife.

"We're going to church Sunday." He said. "Oh, ok. That's cool." "We're also having some guests for lunch if that's ok with you." "It's fine gramps."

Grandpa hadn't had a guest since ages or should I say ever since the accident. Now, I know why he's so happy.

"I'm going out with some friends today gramps." His smile grew wider. "That's great darling. Your parents are out for the day. They won't be back till tomorrow morning." "Why? Where are they?" "Having fun at their old cottage here." "Oh."

After finishing four chocolate pancakes, I was stuffed. "I'm gonna change now. Love you." "Love you too." He kissed my head and I went to my room

What to wear? Hmmm... I looked inside my closet and decided to just go with a simple look.

Blue shirt and brown shorts. As for the shoes, I'll just take my blue high heels and some golden bracelets and why not a thin scarf? Ok. Done. (Outfit on the side)

I heard the bell ring and the door opening. Must be them

"Hello sir. It's nice to meet you. I'm Meggie and this is Tania." Tania waved. "Hi!" "This is Monique and Monica." They smiled and shook his hand but he pulled them into a hug. "And this is Jenny." Jenny? Wasn't she the one in music class? She saw me and smiled. "Hello." She had straight black hair and black eyes. She wore glasses and I must say, she was gorgeous.

"Ok gramps. I'm going now. Bye!" "Have fun!" I closed the door and hugged my new friends.

"So, where are we going?" I asked excitedly. "The mall! Come on. Get in the car. We're going now." Meggie said and opened the doors of her white BMW 1 series. "Ok, so you're gonna have to squeeze at the back." She said. Monica and Monique entered and Jenny followed. "Uh.. I'll sit at the back." I was about to go in when Megan grabbed my arm and pushed me in the passenger seat. "Nope. Since you're our new friend and you're not familiar with this place. You're gonna sit in the front and I'll show you around while driving. Got it?" "Ok."

She turned up the volume and the lovely song, I'll always love came up. Tania and the girls screamed.

"I'm sexy and I know it!" We danced like mad women. "Woo!" I laughed at Tania who failed so badly trying to twerk while sitting. We drove by and guess who just had to see us at the wrong moment? FREAKING LIAM.

"Hey, isn't that Liam?" Tania asked and waved. Liam looked at us like we were crazy and we were. "What? Why is Liam there?" Megan smiled nervously. "I kinda forgot to tell you, he lives on the same street as you." The girls stopped dancing except Tania who was shaking her booty off. "WHAT?" They all shouted. "My ears!" Tania covered her ears and pouted.

"I can't believe it." Great. Liam just had to ruin my day. "But man, he looked hot!" Monique exclaimed. "I mean did you see him? His body was all sweaty and he was wearing a tank top which showed off his fine muscles." "Ooh, does Mickey have a crush?" Monique blushed and shook her head in DeNIALL. (See what I did there haha) "Nope. I have a crush on my perfect boyfriend Lou." "Who's Lou?" "Louis. He plays soccer with Harry and Niall. He's the class clown. Didn't you meet him?" "I don't know. Maybe."

We finally arrived at the mall and the girls got out, squealing and giggling.

"So. Mickey here needs new summer dresses. Mon needs new shirts. Jenny wants to check out jewelry. Tania wants to get a haircut and I wanna find some books to read. What about you Tonster?" "Uh.. This is a bit embarrassing but I need some bras and underwear." "Ooh... Wanna impress boys ey? Well,we know the perfect shop. Victoria secrets!" Monica said. Jenny was a bit quiet. I guess she's shy. "Yeah. Ok." "So, we'll form groups. Mon and Mickey you're gonna go together and check out clothes since you need some. Jenny and me will go see books and jewelry. Tania and Antonia, you'll go to the hairdressers which will take time and we'll meet at Victoria secrets in two hours. Ok?" We all nodded.

Tania grinned and ran with me to the hairdresser.

"This is where the magic begins." She spoke with a man and he led her to a chair.

"Hey Toni, do you also want a haircut?" She asked me. I shrugged. "Fine by me." "Yay!" She told the man what she wanted. "And you?" He asked. "Uhh... I'll have this one." I pointed to a woman with wavy brown hair.

The man applied some shampoo to my hair and did the same with Tania.

I read a few magazines and came across an interesting article.

SIGNS TO SEE IF A BOY LIKES YOU.

Hmm... That seemed interesting.

Examine his body language. Body language can be the "big tell" when it comes to discerning if that guy fancies you enough to date you. Interestingly, body language experts believe that while females have around 52 body language tells to show a guy that they're interested, guys show around only 10.[1] If you subscribe to this theory, this should make your guessing a little easier! All the same, you still need to know what to look for, as well as being sure that you're not mistaking innocent gestures for calls of love--the latter mistake could prove embarrassing.

Wow. Hmmm... I'm just gonna rip this page and put it in my pocket. I did exactly that and a few minutes later, the guy was done.

Tania gasped.

"Wow. You look beautiful." She complimented me. "You look amazing." I complimented back.

I was about to pay when she stopped me. "Nope. I'm paying. Ok?" I wanted to say no but she already paid.

We walked to Victoria secrets and saw Jenny as red as a tomato. What's wrong? Then I noticed that Megan was shoving a bra in her face.

"Haha, Meggie stop!" Megan's mouth dropped and she closed it. "Wow, you two are... I'm speechless." I laughed and took the bra away from her. "Bad Meggie!" Jenny sighed in relief and thanked me.

"So, Tonster? What's your favorite color?" "Uhh.. Black or dark blue." Megan's eyes lit up. "Ah, I see. You like dark colors? Ok. Girls, move it!" They all ran in different directions, leaving me all alone.

I looked around but nothing seemed to catch my eye.

"Look what we found!" Megan waved a black bra in front of my face along with some black panties.

"They look nice!" Megan ran to the cashier. "Hey!" She paid and gave it to me. "A present from me to you!" We got out of the shop and I noticed another set of underwear. It was dark blue. I laughed at her stupidity.

"You thought I wouldn't see this?" She blushed and nodded.

For the rest of the day, we just chilled and ate.

"Look at the time! I have to go girls!" I said and they all looked sad. "Aww... Can't you wait for one sec?" "Nah, I'm bored." Megan handed me the car keys. "Fine, go wait in the car. We'll be there."

I kissed her cheek and ran out the mall! Woo, finally free! I walked to her car when all of a sudden, I got pushed to the ground and dropped all my bags. Ow!

"Look who we have here? If it isn't miss hot body." Ugh.. It was that same guy from school. "Let me go!" He laughed and his friends came our way. "I'm sorry but I can't do that. I didn't really like your present on Monday." "Why? Did it hurt?" I said in a babyish voice. He punched me in the gut and I winced in pain. My dad had hit me there and it still didn't heal. "F*ck." I cursed under my breath. "Now, why don't we have a bit of fun with you?" He started kissing and sucking my neck roughly. I tried freeing myself but his friends were holding my arms tightly. "St-stop." He licked and bit my neck hard which hurt me. "Please stop." "Begging are we?" One of his friends asked. "Please..." "LET HER GO!" Before I could see who shouted that  the guy got pushed away from me and his friends let me go. The mysterious guy punched him until he was unconscious. His friends ran away like cowards and I stood there, still hurt.

"Are you ok?" "I... Uh... LIAM?!" "Antonia?! What the f*ck are you doing here?" "I.. Uh.. Shopping with my friends." He helped me with my bags. "Thank you?" "Just because I saved you doesn't mean we're friends, got it?" What in the hell? "I didn't say..." "Bye." "What the f*ck is your problem? I try to be nice to you but you just insult me and treat me like a piece of crap!" I was crying but I didn't care. I needed to know why he was doing this. His eyes softened but he still had that same emotionless expression on his face.

"It's none of your f*cking problem!" And with that, he left. Again.

"Antonia?" Jenny and the rest ran to me. "Are you ok?" "That f*cking idiot." I whispered. "Who? Who is it?" Jenny asked. "Li-Liam..." "That idiot! He's so gonna get it!" Monica punched the air and it made me smile a bit but I was still crying. "I just don't understand... I try to be nice to him but he just treats me like... Like.. Like crap! What did I ever do to him? Sure, I insult him but that's only because he did it first!" "It's ok Toni... Just understand that Liam doesn't have a heart...." Tania hugged me. "I guess."

After this whole crappy experience, the girls drove me home and I could finally rest. I wanted to see how I looked with my new underwear so I put off my clothes and put it on.

I stared at my reflection in the mirror. Bruises... Everywhere.... I'm so fat.. Ugly... I'm worthless.. My dad is right. I stared at the bruises.. What did I ever do to deserve this? Why me? Why? So many questions and yet no answers...

Why? Why me?














A/N: Hello! :) Comment and vote if you liked and give me feedback. That would help me a lot? I don't mind if it's negative or positive feedback. Anything will help. Thank you! Ok, love y'all and just wanted to say, I won't be updating in a while... I first wanna see if u guys like this story so I can keep on writing Xxx ChokolatLover aka Antonia
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Ohhhh I just finished the first chapter!!!!!!! it was amaZayn! if you still need some characters you can always include me in the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on January 02, 2014
Ok, I'll try haha :) And thank you guys
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on December 06, 2013
me toooo come on chok update update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;)
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on November 24, 2013
O.M.G i love this story chok much better than HURT and that is my fav story rly you better update girl or i will KILL you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;)
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