the day everything change

the day everything change

not your average love story.. but it is close enough to it.. let tell the guys side of the story

published on October 16, 2013not completed

Love hurts

My ego was down the strain. i had never felt so low in my life. I felt like if i couldn't get this one girl then i couldn't get any at all. The next day i came to school with a dozen roses, as i was handing it to her i told her "i love you until the last one dies" ( i thought that was pretty smooth because the last one was a fake so it could never die). she took the roses and threw them away.. all except one anyway, and she finally smiled at me. well i felt like i was the king of the world.. it didn't matter to me anymore that she wasn't the coolest girl in school, or that people might pick on me. i wanted her more then i had ever wanted something in my whole life. I remember the first time i asked her out. "Gretchen do you want to make me the happiest boy in the world and go on a date with me". " I don't really know", she replied with. " oh come on i be on my best behavior i promise". when she finally said yes i had the biggest smile on my face. that night when i was getting ready for my date, i heard my phone ring. it was my best friend Adam and he told me the most terrible news ever... Gretchen had been in a bad car accident
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on April 24, 2014
OMG did that really happen to u ??
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on April 11, 2014
srry 4 u :(
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on April 11, 2014
That had to stink badly
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on March 27, 2014
nice story hunkie
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on January 12, 2014
:-O this is a nice story!! do write more i'll be waiting :)
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on December 18, 2013