love has to end

love has to end

a young girl called michia had her first heart broken by a lad called mason they were a lovely cupple until this happens

published on October 06, 2013not completed

a long day

"why cant i find her" said mason.
the teacher saw mason out side of class and walked towards him and told him a little story "this happened to me mason my boyfriend went off on one but he come back, what im trying to say is michia will come back"
mason walked off down the corridor.
10 minuets later and ambulance come to the school, why was the a ambulance at the school.
they were at the office asking where is mrs greenwoods classroom, mason walked past mrs greenwoods classroom and saw michia lying on the floor with blood on her.
mason ran in the class and asked "whats wrong ?"
the ambulance rushed her out of the school but they couldnt get her pulse they had to stop and try and get a poulse for her, but they never
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come on dun jus cut off there that's not even a complete sentence. MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on October 12, 2013
thank you guys i will make it more intresting and i will finsh it xx;)
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on October 07, 2013
can ufinsh it so I cn r8 it Becuz I haven't even undastood half OF IT sorry xx
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on October 06, 2013
great story so far but make it more interesting come on i like some suspense |-)
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on October 06, 2013
man that's good stuff make more
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on October 06, 2013
boring and why so babish|-)
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on October 06, 2013