Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

You Always Will Be My Summer Love

You Always Will Be My Summer Love Zayn P.O.V
Millions of fans screamed our name and the guitar started playing. My heart dropped and I couldn't help but cry. I was to sing first. "Zayn, ready?" Liam asked. I nodded quickly so he couldn't see the tears in my eyes. "Can't believe your packin your bags, tryin so hard not to cry, had the best time and now it's the worst time, but we have to say goodbye." Harry started singing. "Don't promise that you're gonna write, though promise that you'll call, just promise that you won't forget we had it all!" I cried harder at the lyrics. Niall sang the chorus. "Cause you were mine for the summer, now we know it's nearly over, feels like snow in September but I always will remember, you were my summer love, you always will be my summer love!"
Louis sang his solo and I could feel the boys staring at me. "Wish that we could be alone now, if we could find some place to hide, make the last time, just like the first time, push a button and rewind." Flashbacks of when we first met and when we first kissed came in my mind. Liam continued. "Don't say the word that's on your lips, don't look at me that way, just promise me you'll remember when the sky is grey." I remembered when she broke up with me and rejected me, I knew she was hurt. Niall hesitated at first and the fans stopped screaming, looking confused but then Niall sang. "Cause you were mine for the summer, now we know it's nearly over, feels like snow in September but I always will remember, you were my summer love, you always will be my summer love." Then came my part. The boys looked at me, worried but I ignore them and sang at the top of my lungs. "So pls don't make this any harder, we can't take this any farther, and I know there's nothing that I wanna change, change!" This part of the song meant nothing to me. I wanted to take it farther but it was hard for her since she was still hurt from the past. Yes, it's true, there was nothing I wanted to change. She was perfect and I love her. This time we all sang together. "Cause you were mine for the summer, now we know it's nearly over, feels like snow In September but I always will remember, you were my summer love, you always will be my summer love, you always will be summer love, you always will be my summer love!" And with that, the song ended, the music stopped and the screams grew louder. I will never forget Angela. The girl that changed my life forever, that made me smile, that made me the man that I'm today. I will never forget you, Angela. You always will be my summer love.
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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