Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

A disastrous wedding

A disastrous wedding Angela P.O.V
I was super nervous. Liam's dad agreed to walk me down the isle since my parents were dead. Liam's dad smiled at me and I took his hand. "Good luck." He whispered. The doors then opened and the piano started playing here comes the bride. Everyone stood up and Liam's little niece was throwing flowers. Liam smiled at me and I saw Danielle looking sad. I smiled at Liam and we began. The priest talked and talked till our moment came."Will you have this woman to be your wife, to live together in the convenient of marriage? Will you love her, comfort her, honor and keep, in sickness and in health, and, forsaking all others, be faithful to her as long as you both shall live?" "I will." Liam replied. My turn. "Will you have this man to be your husband, to live together in the convenient of marriage? Will you love him, comfort him, honor and keep, in sickness and in health, and, forsaking all others, be faithful to him as long as you both shall live?" I gulped. I didn't answer and Liam panicked a bit. I didn't want to do this to Liam but... "I'm sorry Liam. I can't do this." Lots of gasps were heard from the crowd and pictures were being taken. "Wh-what?" "Liam, I know you love her." "Who?" "Danielle. You and I were never meant to be. Sure we had something but with Danielle you had more. I know you love her. The way you look at her, the way you smile at her, the way you talk about her, you love her Liam. She cheated on you but you still love her." Danielle stood up and Liam ran to her. More clicks and flashes. I smiled as they kissed. The priest looked shocked. I gave Danielle the flowers. "You may kiss the bride." I said and they kissed. Claps and cheers filled the small church. He smiled and stopped to go to me. "I'm sorry Angie." "I'm sorry too Liam." I wiped the tears away and walked to Zayn. "Zayn, I'm sorry for rejecting you. I was blinded but now I see." I smiled and wiped his tears away. He leaned in and kissed me. This time, it felt right, everything. The sparks and electricity between us. Everything was right. "I love you Zayn." "I love you too Angela." I felt a sudden pain on my side and groaned in pain. Everybody turned their attention to me. I fell to the ground and tried to stop the pain but nothing worked. "Angela?" Zayn bent down and I gasped for air, I couldn't breathe properly. "Zayn."
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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