Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

Getting kidnapped

Getting kidnapped
Angela P.O.V
My head hurt and I couldn't sleep. I felt like crap. Visiting hours were over but I missed them already. Even if I try falling asleep, I just can't. I get nightmares of Troy. I can't get him out of my head. I feel so weak. I take my phone out and check Twitter out. I see awful comments but ignore them. There's too much hate, I'm just gonna switch my phone off and relax. Agh, I can't sleep. I stand up and head to the bathroom. Maybe, a shower will help me relax. I walk quietly and open the bathroom only to find a dark figure standing there, smiling and playing with a small object that seems to be a knife. The figure looks up to me and grins. "I thought you'd never wake up." I froze, that same voice, it's him, Troy. "What do you want Troy?" "You." He coldly said. "Why?" "To use you as bait." He smirked and I quickly ran out. Before I could call a nurse. He took my hair and pulled me back. I screamed in pain but he covered my mouth with his hand. "Now you be quite unless you wanna say bye to this world." His voice was cold and hurt. "Troy, don't do this. If Zayn and the others find you, there's no telling what they'll do." "I don't care. I have nothing to live for anymore. I got fired from my job, beat by my best friend and now I lost my girl. They can kill me but I'm not gonna die before getting revenge." "Re-revenge?" "Yes love, revenge." He whispered and opened the small window in the bathroom. How did he even get in there? He pushed me out and I fell on a garbage dumpster. He jumped and fell right in front of me. Before I could run away, he tied my hands and feet together and put a cloth over my mouth. He brought me to a car and drove. I was scared. What if they don't find me in time? Troy chuckled as he saw the fear in my eyes. "Don't worry babe, you'll soon be joining your parents." What? My eyes widened and he smirked. "Oh you didn't know. Your parents are dead. I hired someone to kill them so they wouldn't get in the way." He laughed. That jerk! I tried to punch him but I was completely useless with my hands tied. He laughed more before turning on the radio. Suddenly, my eyes felt heavy and I closed them. "Good night babe."
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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