Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

Meeting 1D...

He took my hand and brought me to his car. "Get in." "But!" "Pls. Just get in." I entered his car. It smelled just like him. He drove for a while before putting his hand on mine. "So what's your name?" "Angela. Angela Trees." "As you already know I'm Louis Tomlinson. So, what are your hobbies." "I don't do hobbies. I either just stay home and watch TV or sleep or hang with Tro..." I stopped. Troy. I missed him so much. "Cool. And my hobby, obviously is singing, and trying to make people laugh. Anyways, let's talk more later. We're here." He got out and opened the door for me. He then walked up to the house and rang. A curly haired boy with sparkly green eyes, opened it. He smiled at Louis and then stared at me. He checked me out before smiling again. "Hey, who are you? I'm Harry Styles." I shook his hand. "I'm Angela." "Lovely name. So are you with Louis?" "He sorta brought me here to meet One Direc... You." "Then come in." I walked in and heard the door closed behind us. Louis took my hand and brought me to the living room where three pair of eyes looked up at me. "Hey guys! This is Angela." "Is this another one of those girls you bring in every night to 'cuddle'?" The dark haired boy asked. "Haha very funny. You know I'm with Eleanor." "Oh right, my name's Zayn. This is Niall and Liam." He said while pointing to the two other boys sitting on the couch. "Hey!" They said at the same time. "Hi." I said a little coldly. I know, it's one direction, a famous boy band talking to me right now but I'm just not good with people. I've never had proper friends. Troy was the only one who understood me. "So are you just gonna stand there thinking or are you gonna come over and watch a movie with us?" Zayn asked. I rolled my eyes. "Sorry but I don't have time for a movie. I have to..." "Angie. Don't go. Just stay and watch a movie with us. Ok? We'll have fun. Don't let that boy ruin your day." Louis looked at me with puppy eyes. "Pls." He pleaded. "Fine." I groaned. "Hooray! I'll go get more popcorn. You sit right there with the boys." Before I could say anything, Louis ran out. I turned around and all the boys gave me a cold glare. "What?" I said rather annoyed. "We know what you're trying to do." Zayn snapped. "Louis is way too nice for you so don't even think of making a move and ruining his relationship with Eleanor. Ok?" Liam exclaimed angrily. "Oh so you think I wanna be here?" I was angry. "Look I don't like Louis. He's just a guy I hugged on the street cause he looked like my ex! Besides! I don't even like you guys! You're all snobby little jerks who think they're cool just because you sing!" I let it out and heard a sigh from behind. I turned around and saw Louis. He looked hurt. He clenched his fists before walking up to me and pushed me to the wall where he grabbed my wrists not letting me go. "How dare you? I only did this to help you cause you were sad. We're not snobby, arrogant children! We're nice people only making our dreams come true and making fans happy!" "That sounds pretty arrogant to me." I said not being scared. I wasn't scared. He could punch me, hit me all he want. I wasn't going to be scared. I was used to this. "You better shut your mouth before I, I.." "Before you what? Abuse me?" His eyes darkened and he suddenly punched me. I put my hand on my cheek to cool it down. A tear ran down my cheek and he then let go of me, softening and apologizing. I didn't care though. I acted all sad and when he came down to help me up, I punched him right in the eye before running out. I looked around. I didn't know this place. The door slammed open and Liam and Zayn came running. I ran faster but they caught up with me before pinning me down on the street. "Let go!" Zayn taped my mouth and Liam carried me back to their house. I kicked, struggling to be free. They locked the door and brought me up into a bedroom where Liam laid me down on a bed. Zayn ripped the tape off and I bit my cheeks trying not to scream. "Rest now." Liam whispered. "Noooo!!!" I felt a hand hit my cheek and saw Zayn angry. Liam made him go away before sitting next to me and rubbing my leg. "Listen. Louis knows its hard for you so he decided to let you stay here so you calm down and sleep. Louis is a nice guy and forgave you. So pls just be nice and accept this and sleep." Why were Liam and Louis being nice to me. Liam stood up and walked to the door. "Stay." Liam rubbed his head with furrowed eyebrows. "Please just stay. I need someone." Liam understood and laid in the bed. "Good night." He said before singing. I know I didn't like love songs but I was just so tired and didn't care. His voice was so calm and beautiful. I closed my eyes falling asleep.
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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