Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

The talk

The talk Liam P.O.V
"Zayn, I need to have a word with you." Angela's eyes widened. "Why?" She asked. "I'm sorry Angie, but mind your own business. I need to have a word with Zayn, ALONE." She nodded, hurt in her eyes. "O-Ok." She stuttered. She left and I closed the door. "What the h*ll man!" He looked away, now wanting to look me in the eye. "Look at me when I talk to you!" He didn't listen and sighed. "What happened?" "You really wanna know? Cause it's a long story." He asked. I nodded. "Look, before auditioning for the X factor, I had a girlfriend, Angie.  We were happy until she cheated on me with my best friend Troy. When Louis brought her home, I was mad. Furious! So I decided to call Troy to take her back home. He took her and from that day, I kept visiting to see if she got her daily bruises." "Wait, daily bruises?" "I paid Troy to hurt her." "What?" "She deserved it. No one knew but obviously you found out when you saw the picture. You made me realize that she doesn't deserve it and she just made a mistake. I almost killed Troy but she stopped me. She first hugged me then told me to. Go away. I asked her why but she didn't say anything and just stared at the wall. I snapped her out of it and then she told me that she remembered everything. I told her she knew all along but she said no. So we talked and now I understand that it was Troy who did it! He gave her Rohypnol! It's a drug. It causes dizziness, stomach problems, sleepiness, problems talking, nausea, black outs and memory loss. I realized this when she told me her flashbacks. I went to the kitchen and found it. I then poured it all over Troy. I guess we left after that." My mouth was wide open. "Hey, you'll catch flies." He laughed nervously. "Wow." I was speechless. "And you know what he did to her? He raped her! He made her his! I should've known, I should've known." He broke into tears. I patted his back, stood up and opened the door to get water. Three bodies fell on the floor and I noticed Niall, Louis and Harry groaning in pain. "Eavesdropping? Really?" I went to the kitchen and got a glass of water. I got back and Harry was comforting Zayn while the others were pulling silly faces, trying to make him laugh. "Guys, I think Zayn needs some time alone." I gave him water and walked to my room. I heard crying from Angela's room but knew that she needed time alone. This was a crazy day. I sighed and fell asleep on the bed.
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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