Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

Troy's back

Angela P.O.V
Wow, I had so much fun today. Even though Louis brought up my parents. I missed them but what could I do. They didn't want me. A tear ran down my cheek but I quickly wiped it away. I wasn't gonna let it get to me. I saw the loo and walked to it. I went in. After finishing I washed my hands. I got out and noticed a boy wearing sunglasses who looked familiar. I didn't care and walked back when something caught my eye. Zayn. "What are you doing here?" He turned around to face me and I saw him smoking a cigarette. "What? You, you smoke?" He looked at the cigarette and threw it in the trash. "Yeah... I'm trying to stop. Didn't really succeed yet, it's really hard to stop." "Oh." My dad used to smoke. I don't know if he still does though. "And what are you doing here?" "Toilet." He rolled his eyes. I hadn't talked to Zayn in a while. I know he didn't like me but inside, I knew he was a nice guy. I smiled but it quickly faded away when I saw the same boy with sunglasses sitting on the bench next to us. He was smirking at me. He took off his shades and my mouth dropped. "Hey babe." "Troy?" He took a step forward. Zayn stared at us and backed away. "What are you doing here?" "Angie." He got closer and I kinda felt a little scared. "I realized that I've made a terrible mistake dumping you." I gulped. Zayn said nothing and just stared at the ground. "So, what time should we leave?" he asked. "What?" "What time should we head home?" "Troy, I've moved on. I'm not going back." "Oh yeah. I'll make you." Now he was too close. He put a cloth around my mouth and I panicked. Why wasn't Zayn doing anything? I fought but I felt tired so I closed my eyes and blacked out.
Zayn P.O.V
Troy carried her to his car, bridal style. I knew this was wrong but I called Troy. I didn't want her breaking Liam or Louis's heart. I know, I'm a cruel bastard but that's just who I am. I know Angela. She makes men hers and then toys around with them. Even though she looked weak and sad, she wasn't. I knew her. I'd never told the boys this but we've met in the past. She just didn't remember cause Troy kept on giving her drugs that made her forget things. I walked back to Liam. He was a little worried. "Zayn, did you see Angie?" "I saw her kissing Troy and then leaving." I didn't want to lie to him but I had to. She had to go. "What! Why?" Liam started crying. "She doesn't want you anymore. I told you she'd break someone's heart. She doesn't give a damn." I coldly said. Liam wiped his tears and stood up. "Let's go home." "Ok." Liam called Harry, Niall and Louis over. We all walked back. I knew lying was bad but I had to. She would just break her heart in the end, just like she broke..... "Zayn?" Louis asked which almost gave me a heart attack. "Don't do that Louis. What is it?" "Nothing. You were just spacing out."
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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