Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

A weird dream

A weird dream
Angel P.O.V
"Hey babe." I looked up. Troy was smirking at me. What the? Why is Troy here? I felt a sharp pain hit my chest. I tried feeling it but my hands were tied together. Why? I tried talking but my mouth was covered by a cloth. My eyes widened and I looked at Troy panicking. "Shhh, it's ok babe, I'm here, no need to worry." Troy touched my hair which sent shivers down my spine. "Now just relax and everything will be alright." He whispered in my ear. I started crying, I was so scared but why? This is Troy, he'd never hurt me, but we did break up so... He took a knife out of his pocket. "No screaming, no hurting ok?" What? I just realized I was on a bed. He jumped on me and kissed my neck. His hands touched me and I felt filthy. His hand slipped under my shirt touching my.... I screamed. He smirked and pulled out the knife. I don't know what happened but the cloth was gone. "Troy noooo!!!!" "Angela!" I opened my eyes and saw Liam. "Liam!" I hugged him. "Angela, it's ok, I'm here, it was only a dream." Tears, lots of them ran down my face. I was wetting Liam's T-shirt but he didn't care. Louis came rushing in. "What's wrong?" "Angela had a bad dream." Louis relaxed. "Oh." I cried harder. "It's fine." Zayn entered the room and I got scared as he approached me. "Nooo!!!" Zayn stepped back. "Just leave Zayn." Louis said. Zayn closed the door. I calmed down. "Angie, what happened?" "Troy, he, he, he had a knife and he jumped, jumped on me and tried, tried..." Liam kissed my cheek and hugged me. "It's fine, Troy can't get you. You're with us. You're safe, he can't touch you." I felt so safe with Liam. "Are you hungry?" Louis asked. "Yeah." "Breakfast?" I nodded. Liam held my hand and we went downstairs. I sat next to Liam and got a little scared when Zayn sat next to me. Liam left to wash his face. "Are you scared of me?" Zayn asked. Liam arrived before I could answer. "So, I say we go to the fun fair today! What do you say?" Louis exclaimed. "I've never been to a fun fair." "What?!" Louis shouted which made me jump a little. "Why?" "Troy never..." "Why is it always Troy? What about your parents?" My heart dropped. Tears formed but I wiped them away. "Thanks for the food." I got up and left. "Smart move Tomlinson." I heard Liam say. I went in his room and realized I had no clothes. "Don't know what to wear?" Liam asked. "Yeah." "Then that can only mean one thing." "What?" "We gotta go SHOPPING!!!" Both Louis and Liam shouted in a girly voice. I laughed. "Here wear these for the moment." Liam gave me sweatpants and a T-shirt. "Thanks." Louis left and Liam was about to leave. "Liam, you can stay. I don't mind." He closed the door and I blushed. I took off my clothes and Liam couldn't stop staring. "You're so beautiful, you know that?" I smiled. Liam's eyes then widened. "What are those?" He asked pointing at my arm and my stomach. "Why do you have bruises and cuts?" "I don't know." "You better not be lying." "I'm not!" "Ok." I put the clothes on and Liam smiled. "You look good in my clothes. Now let's go."
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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