One Afternoon in My Basement 1

One Afternoon in My Basement 1

one afternoon in my basement, i couldn't believe what i was seeing! it was soooo AHHH!!! wait, cant tell you. you have to read the story on your own. DUH!

published on September 11, 2013not completed

one morning

one morning in my new bedroom, the basement. my brother came down to see me. i said," this is all your fault. if your weren't born before me, you should have gotten the basement for your room." my brother replied," its not my fault, you're the one that our parents don't like the most!" i was SHOCKED! i couldn't believe what i was hearing just like how i couldn't believe what i was seeing yesterday's afternoon. i went to talk to my parents while having breakfast. they keep telling me that," they love me, they love me." i knew it wasn't true. finally, they told me the truth." fine, it wasn't that your brother was the biggest kid in our family or you being the tiniest one. it was that we loved your brother more than you. you're always picky and bragging about stuff that almost all your friends have. like iphones. its really dumb!" i really felt bad about that but i'm glad it was the one and only truth.
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Is this true?
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on April 04, 2014
Cool
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on September 12, 2013
im making more of one afternoon in my basement stroies. next one is one afternoon in my basement 2
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on September 12, 2013
thanks that was the new one of the chapter i posted
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on September 12, 2013
Like the bed part
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on September 12, 2013
ok the next one is coming up!
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on September 12, 2013
Pretty good! You should make it exiting and have a mystery or something in it. But how the parents don't like their daughter is sad!:(( Add more!!!
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on September 12, 2013
:-O ok then... thought more people would like it. so i suggest you be more nice.
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on September 11, 2013
Ok? I thought it was something more exciting! Disappointing story!
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on September 11, 2013