One Direction Fan Fiction

One Direction Fan Fiction

This is about me, sorry all you one direction lovers but you can substitute me for you if you want. I hope to add chapters as often as I can

published on August 31, 2013completed

Chapter 13: Liam 1

Chapter 13: Liam 1 I slept well that night. When I woke up, I realized I never gave Niall his jacket back. I texted him to let him know. He said keep it!!!!!!
I took a shower and got dressed for the day. Liam picked me up the same time as Niall had. We went to IHOP for breakfast. I ended up eating twice as much than Liam. I tried to pay but he insisted that he did. On the way out we held hands and through the car ride.The next time I got out of the limo we were at a mini-golf place.
I turned back around and got back in the car. "I'm not good at this. Can we do something else?"
"I don't believe you. I bet you are amazing and you just don't want to show off. Come on lets play!" He insisted. Since he was so energetic about it I did get out. On the first hole I went first.
"Watch out. This is your warning and I'm still not good at this game."
"Come on you'll do fine!" I took a deep breath and swung. I had hit the ball a little to hard in the wrong direction. It bounced all over but stayed on the grass. His attempt was better than mine, he got a whole in one. He walked with me to my ball. This time he helped me line up my shot.
"One hand here, the other here. Good! Now do a couple practice swings. Not to hard. Good! Better! Now aim it like this. Ok your turn." He coached. I did everything the way he told me to. To my surprise , the ball went in! He clapped for me and I curtsied.
"Thank you. Thank you. This would've never been possible without everyone of the people behind my back all the way through. I would like to give a special shout out to my fans, family, and Liam, my coach." I announced.
"Haha! That was a very nice speech." he said.
We moved onto the next hole. He helped me set it up again. It took me five tries to get it in. To make me feel better, he messed up a couple of times too. I got a little bit better each time. I once lined up an easy shot but it went horribly wrong. He laughed and told me that maybe I did stink. The final score was 30 to 78. Guess who won.
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Its Okay
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on January 25, 2014
And your story :p
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on October 04, 2013
Thanks for the shoutout :) I love you sista!
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Thx Girl. You should update yours. I love reading it
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on June 25, 2014
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on October 04, 2013
amazing. maybe Naill comes back and explains that she's having a child? good though!
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on September 29, 2013
It is pretty good I'll admit :) I like it nice work :)
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on September 02, 2013
the story's not over until I write The End and there is a happy ending
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on August 31, 2013
It's a lovely story, did that really happen? If not, it doesn't matter but I wish that happened to me! :)
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on August 31, 2013
please tell me what you think even if you think its bad
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on August 31, 2013