One Direction Fan Fiction

One Direction Fan Fiction

This is about me, sorry all you one direction lovers but you can substitute me for you if you want. I hope to add chapters as often as I can

published on August 31, 2013completed

Chapter 10: Niall 1

Chapter 10: Niall 1
When I woke up at seven I showered and checked my phone. I had a text from Niall telling me to dress casual and to be hungry. He picked me up at 8:30 and we went to a park.
"Before our wonderful day begins I want to know your thoughts on the contest."
"If I wasn't being told to date you guys then I would've gotten around to begging anyways." I told him. We sat down and he pulled out a basket. I opened it but there was no food in it. He looked at me and pulled me back to the car. We ended up at his house in the kitchen making each other food! Once we had stuffed ourselves, Niall jumped in the pool. I did too! I asked him what else he had planned.
"Its a surprise now stop trying to spoil it." I know that this is going to sound crazy but all the guys are even better in person, but don't make any assumptions ok.
Once we were dried off, I was being ushered into the limo again. I sat opposite of him until his stare bothered me to the extreme.
"What's wrong? Why are you looking at me like that? Did you do something to me?"
"I'm used to having my date sit next to me. Why don't you give me the honor of sitting by me."
"Sorry." I said and scooted over. He put his arm around me.
"You've shared so much about yourself and I think that's only fair that I share some too. This is going to sound corny but here it goes; you're different. I have never felt so close to a fan, a date, or a friend." I looked into his eyes and we held this gaze for a while. The car stopped and we got out. We were at an amusement park!
We were walking in when I realized that nobody else was here. He explained that it was closed to everyone but us and a camera crew who was going to get pictures from 1-2. I smiled and skipped to the gate.
"What are you waiting for? Lets go!" We were let in and the fun began
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Its Okay
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on January 25, 2014
And your story :p
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on October 04, 2013
Thanks for the shoutout :) I love you sista!
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Thx Girl. You should update yours. I love reading it
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on June 25, 2014
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on October 04, 2013
amazing. maybe Naill comes back and explains that she's having a child? good though!
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on September 29, 2013
It is pretty good I'll admit :) I like it nice work :)
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on September 02, 2013
the story's not over until I write The End and there is a happy ending
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on August 31, 2013
It's a lovely story, did that really happen? If not, it doesn't matter but I wish that happened to me! :)
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on August 31, 2013
please tell me what you think even if you think its bad
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on August 31, 2013