This is a story about Dean who is ten years old, Dean love to play basketball, but he doesn't have any friends he can play with. One day his cousin Mike came to town to visit him and see how Dean is doing, then strange things started to happen many dead animals begin appear in the neighborhood Dean started to investigate what is really is going on, but he find out a terrible truth that mark him for life.
Dean was waiting for his cousin, but it was night and late to be up Dean go to sleep when he was closing his eyes he heard a big noise, he stand up of his bed and watch thru the window he didn't see anything. Dean go outside to see what was that noise he exclaimed "who's there?" Mike responded "it's me dear cousin" Dean replied "Mike you scared me" Mire answered "I'm sorry dear cousin I don't mean to do that" Dean replied "why you came so late Mike?" Mike responded "I was playing with my new friends, but I got bored and told them that I go back to home, okay cousin go back to bed good night" Dean responded "good night cousin". Dean go to sleep and his cousin too, Dean was thinking why his cousin came so late. In the morning Mike wake up Dean, Dean said "what's wrong cousin?" Mike responded "you got to see this" Dean exclaimed "what are you talking about Mike?" Mike answered "there's a lot of dead animal on the streets" Dean screamed "what!!!!". Dean and Mike went outside the police was talking to the people of the neighborhood if they see something, Dean said "what happen here?" Mike responded "I don't know cousin, but it looks like someone attack those poor innocents animals" Dean exclaimed "who did this?, what kind of person hurt those poor creatures who doesn't harm nobody" Mike replied "calm down cousin everybody is looking at you" Dean answered "I can't calm down cousin those poor animals passed away". Mike grab Dean by the arm and seat him on the cough because he was acting like crazy in front of everybody.
And can I also make remake of this story ( U know, more gramary corectly :P ) ?