Mina The Heartstealer

Mina The Heartstealer

This story is about my Jeff The Killer Creepypasta OC, who is quite taken with Jeff. She, too, is insane.

published on June 17, 2013not completed

RP Number 1 part 1:: Unexpected Beginnings

Mina: I wonder if he's still there...*holds her boyfriend's heart in her hand, still waiting to kill the girl*

Jeff: *sitting in a corner after killing Liu* They were going to kill me...they didn't think I was beautiful. They needed to go to sleep...

Mina: *wanting to find out if he is still around or not, she leaves her house and stands in front of his door, trying to decide whether to knock or not*

Jeff: *looks around* I hear something...

Mina: *finally chooses to knock* Hey, Jeff, you there?

Jeff: *jumps* What the hell was that??? *hears Mina's voice* Mina?? Where are you??? *gets jittery and nervous*

Mina: I'm outside. Can I come in? I know you don't know me well, but...*fidgets*

Jeff: That's...fine. *just stays in his corner*

Mina: *walks inside, noticing that the house is extremely dark* *walks up the stairs and stands in the hallway* Jeff?

Jeff: Over here... *sticks his ghastly white hand into a small amount of light so she can see*

Mina: *walks towards his hand and peeks around the corner* Is everyone dead?

Jeff: Yep. I killed them all. They all went to sleep.*starts laughing*

Mina: *holds forward the heart of her dead boyfriend* Funny, I just killed too.

Jeff: *just looks at the heart* Interesting... *licks his lips*

Mina: I still have to go after the other girl...*looks towards the door*

Jeff: *looks around, excited* I want to go too...

Mina: *extends her hand towards him* so get your knife and follow me, Jeff...

Jeff: *picks up his knife from next to him and stands, grabbing Mina's hand* Let's go. *has a crazed look in his eyes*

Mina: *leads him to her boyfriend's house, where she sees the 'other girl' sneaking in through the back door* Heh...front door it is, then...the idiot always DID leave his lights off...

Jeff: *looks around, no longer wanting to be outside in the visibility of people*

Mina: *tugs at Jeff's hoodie* come along. *enters her dead boyfriend's home quietly*

Jeff: *just follows close behind Mina, holding his knife*

Mina: *hears the girl calling her dead boyfriend's name* Heh...*sneaks up behind the girl, grabbing hold of her and covering her mouth* Easy, now, darling...it's time to take your heart for keeps...*she looks toward Jeff with a crazed smile, showing her fangs* go ahead, Jeff.

Jeff: *walks up to her, knife in hand, a crazed laugh escaping from him* Go to sleep...*stabs the 'other girl' in the chest, going right through her heart.*

Mina: *watches the girl struggle, then throws her to the ground* hold still, now...*carves the girl's chest open, reaches in, and rips out her heart* what a dear.

Jeff: *just watches the girl slowly die, enjoying the look of horror in her eyes as she goes stiff, he look frozen on her face forever*

Mina: *stands, and bites into the girl's heart, then tosses it to the side, not swallowing any of the blood, but letting it seep from her mouth* *looks over at Jeff*

Jeff: *is still looking at the body, savoring every second of the horrorific sight* She's much more beautiful now, restful...

Mina: *scoffs* restful...it's about time that they both are. *Mina starts to walk away, seeming irritated and unsatisfied* *she breaks a picture frame that had a picture of her in it*

Jeff: *kind of feels like Mina needs a hug, but resists, because he doesn't want to
seem weak, and knows he might kill her, too*

Mina: *tosses a small object to the side. The object shines in the moonlight* Suppose I won't be needing that anymore. *walks towards the door* Shouldn't you wash the blood off? If you don't, people will come for you.

Jeff: But this is my trophy... *looks at himself spattered in blood* All the work we did paid off...

Mina: ...*sighs* Fine...keep it that way, but at least change your clothes. You can change at my house. *walks outside and holds the door open for Jeff, so that she can lock the door before shutting it, making it seem like the 'other girl' and her boyfriend killed each other*

Jeff: ...Fine. *steps outside, the moonlight radiating off his skin, making him appear even ghastlier than he already looks*

Tsutsumi24 Mina: *shuts the door, and turns to walk, but stops, facing Jeff* My...! You look...beautiful...*in a daze*

Jeff: *looks at Mina, surprised.* What was that?

Mina: *shakes her head quickly, forcing herself to focus* Nothing. *walks towards her house quickly, thinking to herself--Mina, what is WRONG with you?*

Jeff: *follows behind her, not really sure where he's going*

Mina: *opens the door to her house, revealing that she lives alone. Her parents live quite far away from her* The bathroom is upstairs, my brother's room is across from it. He stopped living here a long time ago, but his clothes are still in there, they should fit you. *Mina goes upstairs and into her room*

Jeff: Right... *heads upstairs, going into her brother's room. Picks out a black shirt and a pair of black jeans to wear. Decides he doesn't wanna change in the bathroom so he just changes in the hall, ignoring the fact that Mina will see him if she comes out*

Mina: *thinking that Jeff is in the bathroom, Mina walks out still in the process of putting on her corset over her fishnet top. She looks up and sees Jeff, her face visibly going red*

Jeff:: *looks at Mina, about to put on his shirt* Heh...hey there.*stares, and stops getting ready to put on his shirt*

Mina: *face is still bright red, and she mumbles something as she quickly walks past*

Jeff: *follows Mina, stopping her against a wall* What's that all about? *is talking about her blushing*

Mina: N...nothing...*stares at the floor for a moment, then starts to search her house for a bag to put her bloody clothes in*

Jeff: *shrugs and sighs irritatedly* Fine then... *still has his shirt off*

Mina: *looks over at him and her face goes a brighter shade of red* P..put your shirt on...*finishes tightening her corset*

Jeff: *looks down, smirks* But I don't want to...

Tsutsumi24 Mina: *frustradedly walks by him, grabbing two tote bags and filling them with clothing* You need to...we're going somewhere.

Jeff: Ugh, fine... *just puts on his shirt right there*Where are we going?

Mina: To the next town over, I have another house there. We can stay there while we scout out more...victims. *her face goes back to it's normal color, and Jeff sees it happen*

Jeff: I see... *rocks back and forth, his hands behind his back.*

Mina: *looks over at him again, squinting as if she is accusing him of something* why are you rocking like that?

Jeff: Because...? Do I need a reason? *refuses to tell her that it's because
he thinks she too is beautiful, and he is attempting to flirt as best he can*

Mina: *walks up to him, getting really close to his face* You're not hiding something, are you? We're in this together, you know.

Jeff: Of course not! *he laughs while he starts to fidget*

Mina: *squints again, but backs up and hands him a tote bag with clothes for him* Here. This one is full of clothes that you can fit into. *turns and grabs car keys off the wall* Don't worry...I sort of know what I'm doing. *she smirks*

Jeff: *takes the bag, looking at it. He stares, noticing that Mina
suddenly looks suspiciously uncomfortable*

Mina: *walks outside with Jeff, locking the door behind them, she gets into a car that is obviously hers* Get in. *she starts the car, but looks a little uncomfortable*

Jeff: *notices Mina's expression and smirks* Want me to drive instead?

Mina: *seems slightly offended* I can do it...I just...don't drive a lot. *puts her foot down on the gas a little too much, making the car jerk forward*

Jeff: *is still outside the car so she almost runs him over*Whoa! *swings open the door angrily and gets in* Fucking Christ, be careful!

Mina: *sweat drips from her face* I've got this...*she does it again by accident*

Jeff: *accidentally hits his head on the dashboard, causing him to get frustrated* I think you should let me drive. You seem too damn jumpy.

Mina: *looks over at him and gets frustrated, while blushing* I'm fine! *tries again, this time starting the car forward slowly, then speeding up a little too much*

Jeff: Mina. Stop the car. Look at me.

Mina: *stops the car hard, and looks over at Jeff, her face red. She seems upset that she is having such a hard time even starting to drive away from her house*

Jeff: *turns to face her, replacing his frustration with concern..the best he can show*
You shouldn't be driving right now. Something's wrong. *slides his finger across her cheek* Calm down first.

Mina: *her face goes even brighter red, unusual for her normally pale white face* I'm fine. Killer's have to be unstable to do what they do, so I'm fine.

Jeff: I don't think so, missy... *puts both hands on her face and forces her
to look at him* Focus. How are you going to kill if you can't even do that?

Mina: *stares at his unblinking face, looking carefully at the cuts on each side of his mouth, wondering why he carved them. She is afraid of what he may have seen when she was changing, and she fidgets*

Jeff: Why are you so freaked out? You're acting like my brother did before I made him sleep.

Mina: *blinks away tears that start to form* Did you see them? The marks? Did you see them or not? *she continues to shake*

Jeff: The marks? What the hell are you talking about? *looks a little
lost and slightly concerned*

Mina: *seeming suddenly relieved, realizing he saw nothing, she calms down a great deal* Nothing, nevermind it. I can drive, I swear. *she adjusts a half-sleeve that covers the start of her fingers up to her elbow, as if hiding something*

Jeff: *catches a glimpse of what looks like a line* Let's see your
arm, then.

Mina: *glances over at him out of the corner of her eye, and then looks back at the road, starting to move the car slowly forward*

Jeff: *stares intently at her arm* What the fuck are you
hiding, Mina?

Mina: Something from when I first found out about the girl we killed tonight. *her voice is dark*

Jeff: ...cuts? You can't be serious. *is in disbelief*

Mina: *glances over again, smirks, and laughs slightly* I found out about her five months ago, Jeff.

Jeff: Scars, then? *places two fingers on her arm*

Mina: *chuckles, still sounding as dark as ever* Just a bad memory.

Jeff: ...Fine, don't tell me. Whatever. *sits back, looking at the road*

Mina: *drives several hours before arriving at her second house, when she finally speaks again after parking* This is it. Don't be startled, and don't do anything...reckless when we go inside.

Jeff: Why the fuck would I be scared? *gets out of the car*

Mina: *opens the door, and a younger girl comes running out to embrace Mina* That's why.

Jeff: *just stares at the little girl* Who's this?

Mina: *pats the little girl on the head* This is Lilium, and she is my younger sister. Our parents left her here cause they think she's insane.

Jeff: *relaxes, and tries to seem civil* I see. She's not shy, is she?

Mina: She's not really shy, she's---

Lilium: Hey! Sis, you didn't tell me you had a boyfriend, how come he doesn't blink?

Mina: *face goes red* Lilium...

Jeff: *chuckles* I'm not her boyfriend. I'm just an...acquaintance of hers.
*crouches so he's semi-level with Lilium* You look an awful lot like your
killer sister here.

Lilium: Did she kill that mean guy yet? The one who was leading her on after proposing to her?

Mina: Lilium. *voice seems to be scolding* That's enough.

Jeff: Lilium, it sounds like you're upsetting Mina. *motions for Lilium to come over to him.* I won't hurt you. Only because you're Mina's little sister, and...you're just a kid.

Lilium: *pulls out a butterfly knife and shows off with it* I'm not THAT little, and I'm not scared! *she giggles* I'm twelve and a half.

Mina: Jeff, she's been working on killing since before I even thought of it. She's only done animals.

Jeff: *smiles and seems surprised* I've never killed animals. Just my entire family and then that girl earlier today with Mina. *still crouches since he's taller than her*

Lilium: Wow, cool!! *she gets excited*

Mina: She's going to be coming along with us. *goes inside the house* Lilium, is there hot water?

Lilium: *giggles* Plenty! Wait, you're not going to be weird, are you, sis?

Mina: What do you mean..?

Lilium: You can't use my shower if you're going to get in it WITH him!

Mina: *covers her face and walks into the house*

Jeff: *laughs pervertedly* We COULD be mean and do just that....*winks at Lilium, somewhat jokingly* *Goes inside and looks around*
Interesting place...

Mina: *her face goes extremely red, and she runs upstairs, slamming the bathroom door behind her*
Lilium: *blinks, looking up at Jeff* Did I say something wrong?

Jeff: *shrugs* I dunno. She's been acting like this ever since I kinda flirted with her while my shirt was still off.

Lilium: *giggles uncontrollably* Sis always DID like the "different" guys...

Jeff: *looks at her, interested in what she said*
What exactly do you mean when you say "like"?

Lilium: *stops giggling and stares at him* Really? You can't tell? She killed that guy. She used to always talk about how much she couldn't stand him cause he was so normal. Sure, it doesn't mean she was okay with finding out he was a cheater, but...then she talked about some guy that moved into the same neighborhood as her, had some accident in a fire. She never stopped talking about him, but she never mentioned ever saying much to him.

Jeff: You telling me that she has feelings for me? What, like
fucking in love or some shit? *looks lost*

Lilium: I don't know about love, but she obviously likes you if she's been blushing THAT much over you. *smirks, but gets quiet when she hears the bathroom door open* she's done...I wonder if she can remember where her room used to be.

Jeff: Well, now... *sits down on he couch, thinking, with a smirk* That does explain a lot... *decides to go upstairs and see Mina*

Mina: *is in her old room, finding the clothes she wants to wear in just a towel. Her shoulders and arms are covered in scars, and she is talking to herself*

Jeff: What the fuck happened to you, Mina? *is talking about her arms*

Mina: *jumps badly and quickly turns, her towel almost falling off. Her face goes red again* Uh...well...those are the bad memory I mentioned in the car.

Jeff: ...what's the story? Tell me. *approaches her*

Mina: Lies happened. That's why I killed them today. *her face still red, she turns away and picks out an outfit*

Jeff: That dick did this to you? I may be insane, but c'mon, even I
have my standards.

Mina: *laughs darkly* I did this. *starts to get dressed, seeming oblivious to the fact that Jeff is standing there*

Jeff: *watches her naked body* Well...that's different.

Mina: *gets fully dressed and places her hand on his shoulder* Lilium doesn't know. Don't tell her.

Jeff: *looks at her hand then to her face* Fine by me. I can
keep a secret.

Mina: *blushes again* g-good. *walks past him into the hallway*

Lilium: Jeez, Mina...you're cold. *chuckles*

Jeff: *mischievous smirk* Cold? Well. I'll just warm you up, then...
*holds onto Mina from behind*

Mina: *her eyes widen, and she lets out a small squeak*

Lilium: *laughs hard* I told him!!!

Mina: *shoots an accusative glare at Lilium* Told him...what...exactly? *shows her fangs with each word*

Jeff: You know, I kind of had a feeling you liked me...*chuckles and
runs his index finger along her face* I like you too, though. You're...
interesting.

Mina: *looks shocked* LILIUM!!! Youu...! *gets out of Jeff's hold and chases Lilium down* IF YOU WEREN'T MY SISTER, I'D KILL YOU!!!!

Lilium: Take it out on a victim!!

Jeff: *laughs hysterically* What are you, deaf, Mina?
Didn't you hear me? Get back here!

Lilium: I was doing you a favor!! You like the guy, right?!

Mina: Yes, but you can't just go telling him...*stops and stands still, staring straight ahead while her face goes bright red, realizing what she just heard*

Jeff: *approaches Mina, making her look up at him* I like you, Mina.

Mina: *blinks* But I'm...I like killing people, taking their hearts...I look like a vampire. People even CALLED me vampire girl at school.

Lilium: So? Aren't vampires supposed to be beautiful or something?

Jeff: I can't stand normal girls. They're so...boring. A pain.
You're not normal. You're...unique. Beautiful. Especially....in my eyes.
*rocks like he was before*

Mina: *looks around the room in a panic, because of the last time someone said they liked her* But...you...

Lilium: *looks annoyed with Mina* He likes you! Deal with it!

Jeff: Mina. I do like you, and all your strangeness. No....I love you. I won't ever do what that fucking douchebag did to you. That was fucked up...you're
too...wonderful for stupid shit like that. *plays with her hair*

Mina: *backs away, shaking, she runs out of the house with her weapons hidden in her clothing*

Lilium: Oh great.

Jeff: What the fuck..? Did I say something wrong? *looks around*

Lilium: No. She panicked, so she's going to find someone to kill to take the edge off. *hears the car start, and tires squeal, and she gets a little nervous* Aaaand she's driving...
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I'll do best to, I have to work the story around my schedule and the schedule's of my helpers, but I'll post more as soon as it gets done.
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on June 19, 2013
Lilium is a trip, I didn't expect to need to add a sister character for Mina, but then I thought it might be appropriate, especially after I found out that Jeff tries to avoid killing children due to his past. :3
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on June 18, 2013
Her hair is naturally white. Kind of like Steve Martin. XD I actually decided on her name several days before I even knew what this site was, haha. I like the name Zippermouth :0, it's pretty unique. I'm probably going to have Slendy in it, I haven't decided yet. But I know Jane will definitely have to be a part of it. Thanks! :)
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on June 18, 2013