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Forgotten

Another random story that I'm probably get bored of later, but this story I making is about whats happening right now in my life. (If you want to see more you can look at my question a very important question...

published on June 10, 2013completed

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As he rain was falling tears went down my face. I quickly wiped them off when I heard my friend say my name. "Your leaving right." After I said that we both sat in silence. The bus stopped again and two boys got off the bus. One off them stopped to say bye and I just starred. When the guy finally left I tried saying the same thing but the only thing that came out was tears. The bus started moving again and once it got to the next stop I couldn't move, It was like I was glued there and the only way I could get off was if I could say something. I somehow got my self to stand up but then I couldn't move again. The bus driver called my name and I moved again. I walked and then I felt my hand touch something. I looked back and pulled it back as fast as I could, but it felt like an eternity. "Do you want your pen back or not." I took it while he said "It's something you can use to remember me." I somehow got the words thank you out of my mouth, but not bye. So I just walked out. I looked around the pen and saw that is name in capital letters was there. I looked up and he was waving. The bus left and I whispered the words bye, I... love you."
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Oh. My. Irene. This. Is. AMAZING!!!!!! You are a born author!
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on June 20, 2017
Reading this again sort of makes me sad, because in chapter 5 it says i wish i have most people in my class next year and i only have one person and she rarely talks to me:(
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on September 29, 2013
Awesome. Can totally tell what it is about.
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on June 28, 2013
Really good :D
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on June 13, 2013
read the first chapter. LOVE it so far. :))
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on June 13, 2013
Write more please:)
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on June 11, 2013