SHORT Remake of the Hunger Games!!

SHORT Remake of the Hunger Games!!

Featuring guest stars Katniss and Peeta Mellark. This is as if they rebels had lost the war, and the Games continued. And as punishment, Katniss and Peeta have to mentor every D. 12 tribute. It is the 4th Quarter Quell and there is a *special* change to excite the Capitol people... This is about a 12 year old trying to outsmart the Game Makers and stay alive...

published on November 28, 2012not completed

Training

The training lady tells us about the different centers in the training room. Archery. Brute. Weights. Survival. Camouflage. Just as she tells us to "Go" I turn away from the Brute center, where the Careers all crowd around calling which sword they want. I head over to the archery station. I quickly give up after I see that there is no one worse at Archer, than me. I'm barely strong enough to hold the bow, let along pull have the tough, resistant cord. I almost start crying right then and there at how useless, defenseless and weak I am. I quickly rub the back of my hand against my cheek and put the bow down. They can't see that. No. They know that I am physically weak. But I will die mentally strong.

Next I check out the daggers. "Hold it like this," the man shows me. "Now use your pointer finger to direct where you want the blade to go." He steps back, and I step to the side to face the dummies lining the wall. It has a red target, right over it's heart. I step forward with my left foot like I'm going to throw a ball, and I swing my right arm downwards. The blade sinks into the dummy, all right. But it clearly missed the target. The instructor laughed, and out of instinct, I spun around pointed the next blade at him. "Oh, don't get me!" Still slightly laughing, "Besides, I wasn't laughing because it was bad! I was laughing because you missed the target but you certainly would have gotten the job done, right?" I turn away from him and stare back to where the knife found it's victim. Right in the middle of the forehead. I smirk as I see some tributes gaping at the dummy. I throw a few more times, I'm not great, but I don't miss too much. I usually hit the dummy where it would stop a tribute from chasing me at least. As I get the hang of it, the man gets out a dummy with a rope coming out of its back. He ties it to a bar above and pushes the dummy so that it swings quickly along the bar. I turn quickly, facing the dummy always and I let loose another blade. It lands with such a loud, gross thud that more tributes turn this time to stare. Some in amazement. Some in fear. Some in appreciation. But however they are staring, they all stare at the same thing. The dummy with a black handle sticking out of it's stomach.

I try the camouflage, but I just look like a blob. I try survival, and I can tell most of the edible and poisonous plants, but the few I miss I know could literally be the death of me. I don't bother with the brute strength weapons, but work on the rest. At lunch I eat with Zorran, and District 9-11. A tall boy with sandy blonde hair and thick arms from District 10 talks to me and we get along fine. We talk about home, weapons, clothes and I find out his name is Thomas..........
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You have the right idea and very clever quarter quell idea! Although, I think you need to slow down, describe the sourrounding a little more, a bit more dialoge, more characters, and I would like to be able to get to know Aspen a bit more :) if you added these things I think it would be very exciting!! Also, I hope this doesn't offend you in any way!! That's See More
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on June 20, 2013
i don't know how to finish it. @.@
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on April 05, 2013
Ausome it just needs to be finished
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on February 02, 2013
@Charlie-... 8( Was it bad and just needs to hurry up and be done?!? Or as in it's good and you want to read it.. ??
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on January 01, 2013
PLZ FINISH SOOn!!!
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on December 26, 2012
:D thnx!
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on December 08, 2012
I just have to say...again...that this is an AWESOME story!! Can't wait for the rest!!:)
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on December 08, 2012
:3 yay!! I love it when my stuff is loveable! haha!! I all ready have the beginning of the actual Game beginning planned out :D
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on December 06, 2012
@Leigh07 Yes, I did!
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on December 05, 2012
This is good!!
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on December 04, 2012
Thank you, I tried to make it shorter than my last one, did you like the Quarter Quell surprise??
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on November 29, 2012
Awesome remake!:)
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on November 29, 2012