Naruto's Wish: The Black-Coats(LONG CHAPTER)
Nothing happened to me. No awesome thing I do in the beginning of each story. Sorry! ON WITH THE STORY!!!
Once Naruto finished his conversation with kyuubi, Xion teleported back into his little.... 'Hideout' if you could call it that. She had a stone on her back that was bigger than Naruto. -'Why does that coat look so familiar!'- "I-is this big enough?" "Ummm... Yeah, that's more than big enough." "Where sh-should I put it?" "On that table over there." Naruto says pointing at the workbench. Xion walks/limps over to the table and sets the rock down with a loud 'THUMP'. "So, what colors do you want it?" "You can choose the color?!" Xion says, panting. "Well, yeah. Any color you want actually." "Cool!! How about... Blue and golden yellow?!" "Done." Naruto says walking over to the stone. He puts his hand on it and it gets sliced into 1/10's. he touches the 1 out of ten and turns it into a beautiful blade, just like his, but the tip of the blade is deep blue, and as you look down the blade you would see that the color gets lighter, and the eye is a golden yellow. "I-it's beautiful." Xion says from the side. Naruto picks it p and walks over to Xion. "I know." He says bored-like. "Thank-you." Xion says gratefully. She opens a portal behind her and turns around. 'Naruto, run through the portal!' 'Why?' 'Just, DO IT! And once you get through, run!!' 'Okay, okay!!' Naruto pushed a large amount of chakra into his shoes to get a... Ummm...... 'Burst' of speed, if you can call it that. It was really like he was breaking the sound barrier. I don't think Xion saw him when he went past her. He went through the portal and now was running on a diamond white bridge. It was about 15 feet wide and it was 10 feet off the ground. He was coming up on a set of stairs. He made a swift jump over them and ran past a few people with the black cloak on. He saw a castle that looked like it was made out of diamond about a mile in front of him. There was a moon in the shape of a heart behind it. The gates were about as half as tall as the hokage monument. 'Stop, Naruto.' Naruto had to Chanel a small amount of his chakra to stick to the bridge so he didn't run into the gate. 'How far did I run?' 'About 4-5 miles... In 3 minutes... OH MY KAMI!!!' 'Was it the shoes?' 'I think so... Also, you need to go into that castle... To meet someone. But you can't do that without one f those cloaks.' 'Okay? So... Do I have to be in my mindscape to make one?' 'Well... You have to see the sizes, so yeah. Go under the bridge and hide.' 'Okay.' Naruto went to the side of the bridge and hopped down. Before he went under he grabbed the side of the bridge so he could look where he was going to hide. He saw a tunnel that looked pretty dark. He let go of the bridge and did one of those ninja drops that Cole does in INfamous. He walked in he tunnel and sat down with his legs crossed, and closed his eyes. When he opened them he was in his mind-scape. He saw Kyuubi in front of him, doing a thinking pose, while looking back and forth between a few of those black cloaks. (They were on manikins) "Hey, uhhh, what are you doing?" "Oh, you're here! I didn't see you." Naruto walked over to her and looked at the cloaks. "So, are these it? Are these the coats?" "Yeah. What color do you want it?" "Ummm... Black?" "Oh, ok!" Okay, I know that I haven't finished this story, but I got knocked by my cousin when we were playing baseball (no I didn't get hit in the head with a baseball bat... it was a ball.) , and I couldn't remember any details about my writer break throughs that I've been having for a while, and on top of that, my wifi went down. So, I'm writing this in notes (extremely lame) and here is the story. So what size do you want it, like-" "Just something that will show off my muscles, but not to much. I don't need girls trying to get me to take the mask off..." "Okay... So, when you wake up, your cloak will look just like this one, and you can change them if you want to. Oh, I almost forgot. Would you like the chains?" "Chains?" "Yeah, there are these chains on them (they hang right under the adjustable hood strings.) that holds your stuff but makes them smaller than your nail. It might be a good idea for you..." "Alright. I'll take the chains." "M-k. Thanks for telling me what you wanted on it!" She got an urge to kiss him right in the crook of his neck, but didn't know what he'd think of it, so decided against it. He started to walk away, but then... He got a thought. He thought about kissing Kyuubi on the forehead when she least expected it. He did his little break the sound barrier and move like lightning thing while Kyuubi was watching him walk away, sighing, probably looking at his ass. He leaned his mask up a little, while teleporting, and he kissed her on the forehead. She got such a blush... That it would make Hinata jealous. Naruto faded out of his Mind-Scape as he closed his eye, and Kyuubi stood there, wide eyed, with a huge blush that was starting to cover even her neck...(is that possible?) When he opened them he was back in the tunnel, but his cloak felt tighter than normal. He looked down and saw what was up...(no pun intended) the cloak really was showing off some of his muscles... Well, actually, when you have muscles on your muscles, and there are muscles on those muscles, it looks like he has about 50 abs when it's really just 6 of them. So about 30 of those abs were showing. A little overboard, but he wasn't complaining. The material seemed to... Connect with him. He didn't know how to explain it, but even though the cloak was a little tight on him, he could move completely fine. He stretched his arm back and the material stretched with it. 'Hey, Kyuu-chan what's up with this cloth?' 'Hm? Oh... Give me a m-moment...' It seemed like forever(it was really 2 minutes) It looks like... Your main element is darkness. I've only seen 2 others who have nearly complete control over darkness, and ones dead. The other one went into hiding.' 'So what, I can control darkness?' 'Well... Oh, you see that rat out there under the moon? He's to your right.' Naruto looked over and saw a rather large rat scattering around in the moonlight. 'Think of its shadow, and then try to take its shadow away from it. Then try to make into anything you want. If you get that far... (Might be crazy) Try to lift it with your thoughts only.' 'Ooookay?' Naruto stared at the rats shadow, then it started to go into spasms. The shadow moved away from the rat in about 2 seconds, and Naruto thought of foxes. The shadow-blob-spasm thing turned into a fox. A small fox, but a fox. It sprouted wings and flew away and Naruto thought of something funny. An evil Cupid. The fox started to go into more spasms and turned into a curly headed baby with a love bow in his hands (yes he was wearing a diaper) and black wings. It was completely black, except for the eyes. They were sparking with electricity. It looked kinda awesome. 'Oh my kami... You did that in 12 seconds!! That's 40 seconds less than Riku!' 'Is that good?' 'Good?! Naruto, I think you're the first human being to actually have full control over darkness...' 'But didn't you say that I would have to be-' 'Probably an ancestor.' 'Right...' 'I think you should get going to the castle. They completely close down when the moon goes down. I don't know why, so don't ask...' 'Alright?' Naruto did a ninja hop and landed on the bridge again like a boss. He walked, putting a little bit of chakra in his shoes to speed up the pace. Once there Kyuubi told him to just knock, and they would let him when they see the jacket. He saw a big knocker the size of his head with a vine design. He grabbed it and slammed it once. It made a bell sound when you slammed it. It rang, like a freakin church bell... 'Ummm, Naruto, is it me, or did that knocker just... Ring?' 'Im pretty sure it did.' He waited for a few seconds and the doors opened. He walked in and went to the main hall where he saw a girl with blonde hair and two little antenna slicked back. She was wearing one of the cloaks also. She was leaning against a metal rail, with her head looking at the moon through the glass. She heard the doors shut behind Naruto and turned around. She saw his ripped body and blushed. "Are you new to the organization?" She asked. Naruto looked her way and didn't know what she was talking about. 'Hey Kyuu-chan-' 'Just say yes.' 'Ok.' "Yeah. I joined a couple days ago." "What's your name?" 'Should I say my real name?' 'No... Switch the N and the R in your name.' "My names Ranuto." "That's a cool name... Oh, my name is Larxene." (I think that's her name) 'Ask her if you can talk to the boss.' 'Okay.' "Hey, can I talk to the boss?" "Uhhh...(probably staring at his 30 pack) Oh! Sorry, right this way." She walked up a set of stairs to the left and Naruto or Ranuto, followed her. They walked down a mile long hall.(that's what it seemed like) They finally stopped at a small pair of doors with the heartless emblem on them. "This is it! I gotta go, alright? I'll see you later!" She said running down the hallway to (what Naruto thought was) her room. He turned towards the doors and walked through them. He saw about 13 chairs that were as tall as Hokage tower. The tallest was the one at the opposite end of him. There was a man with cloud gray hair and he was wearing one of the cloaks, just like everyone else so far. "State your name, masked one." "My name is Ranuto Umuzaki, and I wish to join your organization." "You wish to join the coat bearers? I only let random people join if they can steal my shadow! And I am the shadow master, so there is no way in hell you can beat me." "Wanna bet?" "Hn.... So ignorant. I would count yourself lucky, boy. Most people who challenge me like that usually are dead by now, but up you're just a boy. I can see through the heavy muscled body of yours that you're just a boy." "Well, if I'm just a 'boy' why don't you let me try my luck at you?" "Hmmm... Fine. But just because you're a boy." 'Dumbass.' "Lets make it interesting. If I can steal your shadow... I get to be your right hand man. If I can't... I'll be your servant." "Deal." The (so far) nameless man jumped down from his thrown, down to Naruto's
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