Her....

Her....

Jane and Mary were best friends. normal 12 year old girls when this happened to them. This is their story.

published on April 11, 2013completed

The vanishing girl.

In came a girl, long burgandy hair, prettier than the sun itself. Mary stared at the girl then Jane, Jane didn't look too surprised. The girl smiled at Jane which freaked her out`. So Mary held up her cross necklace and the girl screamed, then dissapeared.
The next morning, Mary heard a giggle so she woke Jane up. "I recognise the girl and this house!" Jane gasped. Mary didnt hear her, so her and Jane went to look for the girl, then found her snogging a boy who Jane felt attracted to. Then the girl looked up with pure hatred "DO YOU MIND!!" She screamed, then had a smile of happiness, like Janes.
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This is awesome
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on September 28, 2013
thankyou!
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on April 13, 2013
every chapter was short, but i loved the story
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on April 13, 2013