The Girl With No Name

The Girl With No Name

This is about a girl who was left at an orphanage when she was born because her mother didn't want her. Now, she's about to go on the adventure of her life ot find out 'Who is she?'.

published on November 12, 2012not completed

That's Just Great

    After a long while of walking (really, Catherine couldn’t be bothered to keep count of how long), they found themselves at a dead end with only a wood in front of them.

   “James?” Catherine started.

   “Yes?” He responded.

   “Are we lost?”

   “No,” he said simply and walked straight into the woods.

   Catherine was startled. Why in the world would they go in here? She had heard of these woods before. They were supposedly haunted. There were stories that once you’re in, you’re never going to get out. She had always thought that these stories were told to scare the children so they wouldn’t go running off into the woods. But now that they were in them, she found them quite the scare. The dark trees swayed over her, branches like long, evil, bony fingers, just waiting for the right moment to snatch her. She was ninety-nine point nine percent sure that something lurked in the shadows, watching their every move. Barely any sunlight reached the floor, and the only sky she could see was cloudy. Quiet whispers surrounded her, filled with empty promises and evil. Catherine shivered, even though it wasn’t cold.

   “Where are we going?” Catherine asked, in a low voice that only James and herself could hear, for she feared that the trees were listening.

   “It’s not too far from here,” he said, more to himself than Catherine. He didn’t even seem to notice the evil that surrounded him.

   They finally reached an odd forest and stopped after a minute of walking, and Catherine trying not to jump at every sound she heard, while James had just walked on, eyebrows creased, as if thinking very hard. Here seemed to contradict to everything behind them. The trees weren’t evil beings about to snatch her at a wrong move. There were no dark lurking shadows, just a small circle opening where the sun actually reached the ground. It was pretty and peaceful here, but she kept my guard up. Sometimes pretty and peaceful weren’t always the safest.

   We walked right to the other side of it, and entered a cave she hadn’t noticed before. It wasn’t a very big entrance, and they had to bend down to get in, but as they continued on, it got larger and larger until she couldn’t see the roof anymore. It was pitch black except for a small flicker of light deeper in. Her once silent footsteps sounded loud and she felt terribly small in the enormity of the cave.

   “James….Where are you taking me?”  She asked, in a hushed voice that she had wanted to sound strong and defiant, but a quaver of fear in it gave her away.

   “Just wait, you’ll see,” he said. He didn’t even try to comfort her, which scared her. Normally he would, and she would answer saying she wasn’t a baby anymore, she could take care of herself, but secretly she liked it when he tried to comfort her.

   “I can walk by myself now,” Catherine spat, ripping her arm away from him, fed up of his hostility. He didn’t even flinch.

   Finally, they made it to the flicker of light Catherine had seen before. It was a small fire, and right across from them, tending it, was Carolina, just as Catherine guessed. She looked up from the fire when she heard them, acknowledging them with a stout nod of her head.

   “Okay, that’s it! I’m fed up! What’s going on, and I don’t want to be played around with! I mean business!” If it was possible, Catherine would probably have steam coming out of her nose and ears from her furry.

   “It’s a long story,” she said.

   “Yeah, well, by the looks of it, we seem to have all the time in the world!” She snapped.

   “Look, it’s not our faults!” James finally said sounding like his old self, except for the fact that his voice sounded broken, and he slumped to the ground, sitting crossed leg, staring into the fire.

   “Oh, really? Than whose is it? The ghost next door!?!” She had no pity for her brother right now; he had given her none, why should she give him any?

   “Catherine, you’re in grave danger! There is no time to fight with us right now; you’re just going to have to trust us. Now sit,” Carolina said in an air of demand that Catherine didn’t know she had. She sat down at the same as Carolina, right across from each other, eyes locked, Catherine not daring to blink.

   “Well, ain’t that just great! Didn’t have any time before,” she grumbled.

   “And we don’t have much time now either. So let me start,” Carolina pleaded.

   “Fine,” Catherine sighed, tired of arguing.

   “Thank you,” she nodded, and started. But Catherine didn’t hear her first words, for she was sure she had heard a sound behind her. She looked back, but nothing was there. Trying to pay attention to Carolina once more, she couldn’t shake off the feeling she was being watched.
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THIS IS AMAZING I NEED MORE WHEN IT'S DONE YOU MUST PUBLISH IT THIS IS THE BEST BOOK EVER WRITTEN!!!!!!!!!!!! There are a few grammar errors, but other than that BEST BOOK EVER!!!!!!!!
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on May 22, 2015
nice story!
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on April 06, 2015
Really good! What's the mist? Is it like Percy Jackson? Catherine has a name. It's Catherine. She's not the girl with no name. So good!!! What happened to Joe?
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on March 14, 2014
I got really confused with this story I gave u 5 stars though keep on writing.......
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on March 03, 2014
this is really good! 5/5 keep writing please!
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on February 15, 2014
I mean chapter five:P
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on November 16, 2013
Super sucky news; my computer broke down, and I lost ALL my writing!!! SO now, I have to start again, and I had finished this story which sucks big time!!!!! But don't worry, I hope to get a new chapter up each week:) I put up chapter seven, and will advise my fans each time a new chapter is up:) Thank you for reading!!:)
~Marguarette3636
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on November 16, 2013
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on October 08, 2013
That was an amazing story :) :) :)
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on September 09, 2013
To my dear and wonderful readers....:)
I want to clear something up; Mary and I are amazing friends and make fun of each other and brag to one another ALL the time:) So don't worry, she isn't a hater, and I'm not a total air head:P I just had to clear that up, because the last time I went on (for like two seconds) it bothered me and I just wanted to clear that See More
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on August 05, 2013
And Mary36 stop being so mean X-(
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on July 31, 2013
But marguarette3636 even though she insulted you don't listen to her. Just leave haters... I mean she never did anything, she's only a member on two pages....
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on July 31, 2013
Nice story.... :)
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on July 31, 2013
The best story ever! SOOOO GOOD!!! PLEASE.Write.More!!!
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on July 14, 2013
I know you're just jealous of me Mary, and my incredible writing skilss....Excuse me, but who gets A+ on every writing story she ever WROTE!?! Um, me :) You're just jealous you can't write as well as me....What did you get on your last piece of writing? And you didn't even read it I bet, just wrote that comment:P Loser:P
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on June 18, 2013
ur stoie was well im going to be honest........it stinks
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on June 18, 2013
New chapter peeps!!:) Next one coming out this weekend, I PROMISE!!!!:) Sorry if this chapter ain't the best, I wrote part of it late at night ^.^ LOL:P Well, enjoy!!:D
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on May 29, 2013
Contine plz ^U^
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on March 31, 2013
Good story!!!!!
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on January 30, 2013
Please continue!
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on January 10, 2013
i love it
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on January 07, 2013
great!
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on December 11, 2012
Sweet story!!:)
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on December 10, 2012
Awesome story!!! Can't wait for the rest!!!:)
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on December 09, 2012
ch 2- cool
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on December 09, 2012
Cool story but I have to know what happens please continue it! :D
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on December 05, 2012
Are you going to continue the story? Sometime soon? Cuz you really should.
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on December 05, 2012
AWESOME STORY! Can't wait for the next chapters!
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on November 30, 2012
average
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on November 28, 2012
Please comment what you think:) Thanks!:)
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on November 20, 2012
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