The Girl With No Name

The Girl With No Name

This is about a girl who was left at an orphanage when she was born because her mother didn't want her. Now, she's about to go on the adventure of her life ot find out 'Who is she?'.

published on November 12, 2012not completed

Secrets

Carolina took a shortcut to the girls’ bathroom. The orphanage was like a maze. It was an old building filled with twists and turns, lots of staircases and secret passages. If you were anyone but Carolina, it would seem like a simple, old building. But Carolina knew better. She always took the secret passages to get around the building, so as to get to places faster. She had learned about these passages when she was young and had first come here. She was walking around, not really sure of what she was looking for and had stumbled upon these passages. Now, she used them for almost any reason, so you wouldn’t normally see Carolina walking around, and that was the reason why she seemed to magically appear in rooms.
   She was so used to these secret passages that she probably could get around them with her eyes closed. It was embarrassing to say, but she knew these passages better than the normal way that everyone took around the building. Sometimes she would get lost when she walked around the building without using the secret passages, which was quite embarrassing. She should really start using the normal way, but she never did, no matter how many times she scolded herself, and told herself she should really not take the passages all the time.
   Maybe she liked it so much because when you were walking on the first floor of the passages (as she was now), grass and plants grew on the floor, and she liked to see them there and walk through them. She had an idea why they grew there, but she didn’t tell anyone, of course, or else she would have to tell people about the passage.
   After a while, she made it to the girls’ bathroom. She hurriedly changed in a bathroom stall into her green skinny jeans and a simple blue tank top. It was mid-May, and it felt like it. It was beautifully sunny today, like it had been for the past week. She got out of the stall and another girl took her place. She looked around for Catherine. She didn’t see her, and she didn’t bother to go and see what was holding her up, even though she felt like it. She learned to give Catherine her time and space.
   Catherine washed her hands and fixed up her hair before she went back to the secret passages to get to the cafeteria for breakfast. However, on her way, she saw something that she thought she would never see, and she hoped she’d never see. At the end of the passage, she saw mist. The Mist.
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THIS IS AMAZING I NEED MORE WHEN IT'S DONE YOU MUST PUBLISH IT THIS IS THE BEST BOOK EVER WRITTEN!!!!!!!!!!!! There are a few grammar errors, but other than that BEST BOOK EVER!!!!!!!!
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on May 22, 2015
nice story!
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on April 06, 2015
Really good! What's the mist? Is it like Percy Jackson? Catherine has a name. It's Catherine. She's not the girl with no name. So good!!! What happened to Joe?
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on March 14, 2014
I got really confused with this story I gave u 5 stars though keep on writing.......
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on March 03, 2014
this is really good! 5/5 keep writing please!
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on February 15, 2014
I mean chapter five:P
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on November 16, 2013
Super sucky news; my computer broke down, and I lost ALL my writing!!! SO now, I have to start again, and I had finished this story which sucks big time!!!!! But don't worry, I hope to get a new chapter up each week:) I put up chapter seven, and will advise my fans each time a new chapter is up:) Thank you for reading!!:)
~Marguarette3636
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on November 16, 2013
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on October 08, 2013
That was an amazing story :) :) :)
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on September 09, 2013
To my dear and wonderful readers....:)
I want to clear something up; Mary and I are amazing friends and make fun of each other and brag to one another ALL the time:) So don't worry, she isn't a hater, and I'm not a total air head:P I just had to clear that up, because the last time I went on (for like two seconds) it bothered me and I just wanted to clear that See More
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on August 05, 2013
And Mary36 stop being so mean X-(
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on July 31, 2013
But marguarette3636 even though she insulted you don't listen to her. Just leave haters... I mean she never did anything, she's only a member on two pages....
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on July 31, 2013
Nice story.... :)
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on July 31, 2013
The best story ever! SOOOO GOOD!!! PLEASE.Write.More!!!
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on July 14, 2013
I know you're just jealous of me Mary, and my incredible writing skilss....Excuse me, but who gets A+ on every writing story she ever WROTE!?! Um, me :) You're just jealous you can't write as well as me....What did you get on your last piece of writing? And you didn't even read it I bet, just wrote that comment:P Loser:P
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on June 18, 2013
ur stoie was well im going to be honest........it stinks
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on June 18, 2013
New chapter peeps!!:) Next one coming out this weekend, I PROMISE!!!!:) Sorry if this chapter ain't the best, I wrote part of it late at night ^.^ LOL:P Well, enjoy!!:D
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on May 29, 2013
Contine plz ^U^
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on March 31, 2013
Good story!!!!!
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on January 30, 2013
Please continue!
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on January 10, 2013
i love it
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on January 07, 2013
great!
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on December 11, 2012
Sweet story!!:)
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on December 10, 2012
Awesome story!!! Can't wait for the rest!!!:)
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on December 09, 2012
ch 2- cool
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on December 09, 2012
Cool story but I have to know what happens please continue it! :D
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on December 05, 2012
Are you going to continue the story? Sometime soon? Cuz you really should.
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on December 05, 2012
AWESOME STORY! Can't wait for the next chapters!
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on November 30, 2012
average
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on November 28, 2012
Please comment what you think:) Thanks!:)
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on November 20, 2012
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