Your Twitching, Wonderous Eye

Your Twitching, Wonderous Eye

This is a poem I came up with in my head around 3 days ago. It's weird because I came up with it at night while I was watching a movie on Chiller. I memorized it and wrote it down the next night. Enjoy. :) NO HATERS!!!!

published on April 04, 2013completed

Your Twitching Wonderous Eye

Your Twitching Wonderous Eye
It was your eye, your twitching eye.

   It twitched and twitched and I wondered just why?
It drove me mad and I knew you had to die.
So I wondered and wondered. I wondered if you could fly.
   So I carried you to the rooftop.
Where I knew you would and had to drop.
I wondered if your body would go plop....
or if you'd do a flip flop.
Even if you'd fall on your bottom or top.
   But I couldn't and just wouldn't.
Until I looked into your eyes in which began to cry.
You begged and begged for murcy in which you wouldn't get,
Because you had just awoke from a slumber inside of a pit.
So I wondered and wondered. I wondered if you could be hit.
   I sat you down and tied you up. I made you say your goodbyes.
I hit you and hit you and hit you. I decided to gorge out your eyes.
                Your twitching and twitching eye.
      It was the twitching that made me wonder why.
                Why oh why did you have to die?
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on June 04, 2014
Yash unicorns! :3
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on April 05, 2014
Like a poem like this!! ABOUT UNICORNS!! XD
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on May 06, 2013
Lexi: Reallys!?!? :D Thanks, zoe!! You awsome and so nice!! :P I bet you could write something good, too. :D
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on May 06, 2013
Wow. Lexi this is one of the BEST POE.S ive ever read!!! I mean, I'm serious, I really like this. Its creative, it keeps you thinking, it plot, I mean, I don't know how to say this in words its AMAZING!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
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on May 06, 2013
OMG!! How ironic. At my school in literature we were talking all about Edgar Allen Poe!! We red I think ONE of his poems which is a rip-off 'cause he's so awsome. We also read the poem, 'The Highway Man'. :p
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on April 06, 2013
I agree with becca01thebest, but great poem though! (;
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on April 05, 2013
Cool! Nice poem, have you read the short story 'The Tell-Tale Heart' but Edgar Allan Poe? It's brilliant, this reminded me of it. Crime and Punishment, too.
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on April 05, 2013
:) Thankya.
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on April 04, 2013
It is good, though :)
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on April 04, 2013
:)
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on April 04, 2013
I know..... For some reason this poem just came to mind.
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on April 04, 2013
A bit...depressing?
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on April 04, 2013
Thankyou. :)
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on April 04, 2013
Lmao wow but I loved this poem lexi it was very enjoyable to read it was just so mysterious and it leaves the reader thinking and trying to find out who the speaker is in this story you know? It's so mysterious and wonderful =D I love your poems
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on April 04, 2013
THANKYOU SOOO MUCH!!! :) :) :) Another weird thing is that I was thinking about one of YOUR poems when I came up with the ending O_o
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on April 04, 2013
**figure out who
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on April 04, 2013
Honey u did great!!! This poem is the best I ever read its so mysterious because as a reader, your trying to figure purveyor this person is and wonder if its human or not. I loved this and how u made it rhyme was just fantastic. Great job lexi this so deserves
five stars and some love =)) <3
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on April 04, 2013
How did you all like it. :) Silent Hope? Icecat? Ballet? Etc.? Hehehe...... Please comment and rate.
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on April 04, 2013