In this story I am married to Ray-Ray. I was sixteen and pregnant. And a teen Mom. I really thought things were going really great with us at first, but hey! You don't always get the right thought about something. Now. Who's ready for a good story.? I know I am.
She was wearing this.^^ "How do I look.?" She asked. "Like you belong on a dang stripper pole." I answered. "Baby.! Stop." Ray said. "Remember when you dressed like that.?" He asked. "Yeah. But I was twent-three and grown." "Whatever." Ray-Ray said. "Go on to your little party Nevaeh. She left. "You're taking all this out of proportion." Ray-Ray told me. "How am I taking all this out of proportion.?" I asked. "'Cause. She's just a child." He said. "A child that tries to act grown." I said. "'knw. I'm done with you're sh** Rheini. " He said as he began to pack his stuff. ....
Thank you. No I was 16 and pregnant. We got married when I turned 20. If you want I'll make a part two, but it might take a while. P.s. Did you go to Evans last year?
Okay so, Your story is nice. But please make another one! Because what about Nevaeh? Did she ever return from the party like? I don't get it. So did you try to stop him from leaving? What time did he leave? Like just some details or something. But I would rate this 3 out of 5. Sorry :(
23-16=7