Stories Entertwined

Stories Entertwined

This is a story about all your favorite book characters coming together and spending their senior year in Mount Grays High School.

published on September 04, 2014not completed

Four times the charm

~Hazel's POV~

As the class poured out of French class, I spotted Beatrice Prior. She was popular for harking from Chicago, the faction Abnegation. I scanned the crowd to find others I knew. I spotted Renesmee Cullen in the crowd. She was a sophomore, like me. Her older sister, Bella Swan, and her older brother, Edward Cullen, were juniors. Her past was unknown. She was a floater, avoiding the other kids at Mount Grays High and sitting with her siblings at lunch. But I saw her talking to Annabeth before school started, and she sounded perky enough.
Oh. Annabeth. She was coming out from Algebra. Luke, a blond haired guy, trailed behind her. He flashed Tris an optimistic grin, exposing his perfect teeth, which Tris didn't return. Christina, who had passed notes to me during French, told me he had ditched her suddenly before school started.
Edward and Bella passed. Edward had a hand around Bella, guiding her away from the students. Four trotted up to me, avoiding Tris's gaze as she walked away. "Hey, Four," I said. "Hey, Hazel." "Please," I said, "Call me Hazel Grace." Images of me and Augustus Waters floated through my brain, one after the next. Smiling. Playing the Price of Dawn video game. Then words followed.
"Okay? Okay." My thought when he died: "I do, Augustus, I do." All the memories crumbled together in a ball that rolled around in my brain, triggering aches in different parts of my brain. I sighed.
"Sorry. Sorry. I forgot!" Smiled Four. "It's not funny!" I wanted to scream. But I knew if I explained my past relationship with Augustus, Four would feel upset at how much it took to get over him.
Four wrapped his arm around my shoulders and guided me towards my next class: Art. "Are you an interior designer?" he asked. I had heard this pick up line many, many times.
"Stop flirting with me, Augustus Waters!" I snapped. My hand flew to my lips. "I mean, Tobias Eaton!" I giggled under my sweaty fingers. Four turned to me. "Hazel," he said, "what's wrong?"
My story spilled through my lips and slid on the pearl floors outside of Art. The whole tale was told nice and clear, like it was a monologue I had memorized. I had expected Tobias to either be furious or puzzled. But instead his warm hands were on my torso. "I'm sorry, Hazel," he said. Then his lips met mine. When he stopped kissing me, he explained his untold story to me. I never knew he was dating Tris before me! It made me look at her rib cage below her B-Cups a lot differently. A bullet lodged in there! I couldn't picture it.
Four smiled at me. His normal toothy grin, but understanding in his eyes. I felt tired and woozy. I held onto him for support.
"You can really charm somebody," I muttered. Four shrugged.  I stumbled into Art.
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A young lady was the teacher in Art. She wore a brown paint-stained apron. Dry and wet paint combined on it to create a color to matched the color of the original apron. Her black hair tumbled down her back. She wore earrings that brushed her shoulder blades. They tickled the eagle tattoo she had there. She stroked a piece of thick blank paper. The brush strokes were faint and smooth. But I couldn't pay attention.
Four.
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Don't worry, there is a funny twist. Luna realizes that the only reason she liked Jacob was because he smelled like french fries
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on September 17, 2014
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on September 17, 2014
AWESOME!!
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on September 14, 2014
THIS IS AMAZING!!! WRITE MORE SOON
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on September 13, 2014
Love the update! 8D
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on September 12, 2014
YYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on September 12, 2014
I DEMAND MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-B
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on September 11, 2014
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on September 11, 2014
I need mooooooooooooooooooore
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on September 08, 2014
The way u wrote the start bit was wrong you start off with first person then when Tris meets Luke it goes into third person and after that back to first person. Good story though!
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I know
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on September 06, 2014
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on September 06, 2014
How I picture the Foutris breakup:

Tris: *out of the hospital FINALLY*
Four: Tris, we have to talk.
Tris: What is it?
Four: Why do you keep throwing away your life? Risking it all? You coul've died! Think of the people you would've left behind! See More
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on September 11, 2014
I will include it
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on September 06, 2014
If you wanna include that in the story you can :)
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on September 06, 2014
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on September 06, 2014
I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
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on September 06, 2014
i love
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Thanks
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on September 06, 2014
Thanks
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on September 06, 2014
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on September 05, 2014
AWESOME
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Thanks!
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on September 04, 2014
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on September 04, 2014
AWESOME! I expect Percabeth action :p
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There is, and there is drama surrounding that: Annabeth is dating two people people at once: Percy and Gale!
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PHEWWW
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on October 04, 2014
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on September 05, 2014
PERCABETH FOREVER!!!!! :)
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on September 05, 2014
Kidding! Annabeth never dates Gale :)
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on September 05, 2014
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on September 05, 2014
Percy breaks up with her when he finds out then Gale catches influenza and dies, meanwhile Annabeth attends his funeral and then gets back together with Percy, then
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on September 05, 2014
PERCABETH
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on September 05, 2014
It doesn't work
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on September 05, 2014
I can't picture it
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on September 05, 2014
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on September 05, 2014
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on September 04, 2014
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on September 04, 2014
KATNISS IS IN YAY!
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Yup. The third chapter is in her POV
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Sorry, the fourth
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on October 24, 2014
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on September 04, 2014
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on September 04, 2014
Love it!
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Thank you!
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