That's... Sort of illogical. One could say it's just the art style, but in reality, it just kinda doesn't look right. Clearly I'm not at all an artist, but I know it's not physically possible to have shoulders that small. I don't mean to criticize, but I just think it'd better if you made the shoulders wider and fixed the placement of the eyes. Again, just my See More advice; I probably don't know what I'm talking about.
One could say it's just the art style, but in reality, it just kinda doesn't look right. Clearly I'm not at all an artist, but I know it's not physically possible to have shoulders that small. I don't mean to criticize, but I just think it'd better if you made the shoulders wider and fixed the placement of the eyes. Again, just my See More advice; I probably don't know what I'm talking about.