http://www.qfeast.com/story/D9jFQp/I-Can-t
This was my first story on qfeast. Opinions?
This was my first story on qfeast. Opinions?
I Can't
Lucy's best friend has fallen in love with her. He makes her choose. Choose between being his girlfriend or not being his friend at all.
on August 17, 2014
Name: Liv Bodner
Age: 16
Faction: Amity
Parents: John and Larissa Bodner
Aptitude Test Suggested Faction: Candor and Erudite (Divergent)
Chosen Faction: Erudite
Age: 16
Faction: Amity
Parents: John and Larissa Bodner
Aptitude Test Suggested Faction: Candor and Erudite (Divergent)
Chosen Faction: Erudite
on August 17, 2014
Would you like me to advertise one of your stories?
on August 17, 2014
tanks 4 the follow :D
on August 17, 2014
Where do you get the cool fonts in your bio and the thing around the word kittens?
on August 17, 2014
Your story could be a bit more descrtiptive, but over-all, I love the concept and can't wait for more! :D
http://ookamikasumi.deviantart.com/gallery/24356519/Writing-Tips-and-Tricks
I use this to help me write. I still have a long way to go before I can call myself an author. That's all it is, improvment! Both you and I are improving, so don't but yourself down! Just say something like..... I'll get better if I keep trying, or..... well, I'm not good at optimisium, See More but you get the idea! :D Hope this helps!~~~
I use this to help me write. I still have a long way to go before I can call myself an author. That's all it is, improvment! Both you and I are improving, so don't but yourself down! Just say something like..... I'll get better if I keep trying, or..... well, I'm not good at optimisium, See More but you get the idea! :D Hope this helps!~~~
on August 17, 2014
on August 17, 2014
Wanna read ma new story?
on August 17, 2014
on August 17, 2014
Wanna read ma new story?
on August 17, 2014
Wanna read ma new story?
on August 17, 2014
Wanna read ma new story?
on August 17, 2014
Wanna read ma new story?
on August 17, 2014
