MY COMPUTER IS HAUNTED.
At RANDOM times, iTunes starts playing a song. Even when I QUIT iTunes, it starts up again at random times and starts playing songs. The song it plays is a CREEPY song that consists of a little girl going "Laa... daa... da.... da..." BUT GET THIS: I REMOVED iTUNES FROM MY DOCK, AND IT JUST POPPED OUT OF MY TRASH AND STARTED PLAYING A SONG. I don't even CLICK on it but it plays a song. I LITERALLY PUT IT IN THE TRASH, BUT IT JUST POPPED OUT AND WENT TO MY See More DOCK AND STARTED PLAYING THE CREEPY HALLOWEEN SONG AGAIN. And now it won't even let me PUT it in the trash!!
At RANDOM times, iTunes starts playing a song. Even when I QUIT iTunes, it starts up again at random times and starts playing songs. The song it plays is a CREEPY song that consists of a little girl going "Laa... daa... da.... da..." BUT GET THIS: I REMOVED iTUNES FROM MY DOCK, AND IT JUST POPPED OUT OF MY TRASH AND STARTED PLAYING A SONG. I don't even CLICK on it but it plays a song. I LITERALLY PUT IT IN THE TRASH, BUT IT JUST POPPED OUT AND WENT TO MY See More DOCK AND STARTED PLAYING THE CREEPY HALLOWEEN SONG AGAIN. And now it won't even let me PUT it in the trash!!
vive_la_revolution
Awesome! :D I forget, though. Who's writing from whose POV? And now that Luke is technically a main character, should someone write from his perspective?
on October 21, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw
Okay. I agree. :3
on October 21, 2015
vive_la_revolution
Also, the emotional strings and an almost sort of choice in the end about whether he saves his mother or Evelyn should really add something to the plot. And I think that all of the stuff you said is more towards the end, and we can work out those details later. In the meantime, we should have some more things happening that will slowly progress the story towards See More the climax. Margaret ending up working as a spy for Killian. Ryia losing her adoptive mother, who is actually Hadrian's sister. Cristiana and Leo getting the necklaces. (also, as for the necklaces, I think that they should just be a signal to the dragons that the people are Guardians. The idea of being able to control an entire race like that is just... IDK, but it doesn't sound right. It sounds like something a villain would do, not something a hero should try.) So, yeah.
on October 21, 2015
vive_la_revolution
OK, cool. However, I really don't want this to be a Romeo-and-Juliet type thing, and I really don't like the idea of Evelyn attempting suicide. I also think that (in the backstory), Killian didn't actually end up killing the whole town until after Viviette got mad. He didn't mean to kill his parents; he just got so frustrated and mad at Viviette for being mad See More at him for killing the guy who hurt her that he turns into a dragon and destroys the town. It's sort of an out of control thing; like Elsa. Then, after realizing what he's done, he slowly goes insane. And the whole breaking up thing didn't work that way in the middle ages; they would probably be courting, so yeah. Also, I think that Luke should be being blackmailed through his mom, because the idea that he'd hurt a girl like that just for money really does damage to his character.
on October 21, 2015
GalacticBiRavenclaw
Those were my ideas.
on October 21, 2015
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